I stood up, being careful with my other hand and went to the bathroom and pulled my plain white tee shirt and black vest on, and my black jeans. I tied my converses on and brushed my teeth and hair and put it in a lose ponytail.2
I hurried down the stairs, and out the door, telling my mom I was going to go see Emmett. 3
She chuckled, and mumbled something about "Boyfriend" and I smirked, and ran across the road over to the house. I took a deep breath and knocked, and put my index and middle fingers in my pockets. 4
"Coming!"I heard a older female voice call out, and foot steps towards the door. I took another deep breath and waited. 5
A older women who looked in her 20's came up to the screen door, her blonde hair lose, and her golden brown eyes shining, with interest, her jaw ling strong, and perfect with her face, she seemed like a wise strong women. Someone you could look up to. 6
"May I help you?"She asked, her voice was soft and strong, to fit her face, I felt like that witch in snow white around her. "Is Emmett here...?"I asked, and she smiled and pointed behind her. "He's outback with the horses. He'll be happy to see you, Pandora. He's told me a lot about you, I'm his Aunt, Cordelia."She said and smiled again, showing her perfect white teeth and odd longer the normal canines. 7
I blinked lost and smiled slightly, and headed around the house, to the stall with the horse's. (Or so I hoped) 8
"Emmett..?"I called and walked into the stall, many brown and black horses, but the one that stood out to me was a beautiful white horse, with a pure white main. 9
I walked over to it and reached my hand out to make sure I didn't scare it. It stayed relaxed, and let me pet it. "Wow..."I breathed and smiled, and ran my fingers through its main. 10
"Beautiful isn't she?"I heard a familiar voice say behind me, and went to turn around but Emmett was already by me, he was in a black tight fitting tee shirt, and jeans. "Yeah...Whats her name?"I asked, not looking up from the horse again, still petting it. "Haven't came up with one yet."Emmett said and put his hand on the horse softly and stroked it. 11
I thought for a minute, biting my lip. "Arabella."I said and smiled, but Emmett raised his eyebrow then grinned. "Arabella sounds perfect."12
I took another deep breath before my next question. "A-are...are we...dating..?"I said quietly, and never looked up but heard him swift his weight. 13
I bit my lip, nervous and not knowing if I wanted the answer. "I....guess...I mean if you wanna be.."He said and cleared his throat uncomfortably. My heart went faster and I was scared it may pop out of my chest. He left the answer to me? Damn. 14
I took a deep breath and held it, then breathed out. "Yes."I looked up at him to see his reaction, but he seemed to be thinking about something else but then grinned. "Awesome."I then noticed his freakishly long canines like his aunt, must have been a family thing. I smiled and looked back at Arabella, and felts his arms go around my waist and looked back at him. 15
His eyes were locked on mine, and his breath was against my face, and he put a hand on the small of my back and his other on the back of my head tilting it slightly as he kissed me. 16
My arms wrapped around his neck, and my body seemed hotter then what it was, I may have forgotten to breath but that didn't seemed needed. 17
This time I pulled away and stared into his golden brown eyes, and smirked. "Having fun?"I asked with humor in my voice. He smirked and pushed me against a wall. "You have no idea."He said and kissed me again. It was odd but it seemed like I had known him all my life, that I had always loved him. Love..It may not seem like that right word but it seemed like it right now. 18
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Soon after leaving Emmett's, I went back home, telling my mom I was just "hanging out" and up to my room, I looked out my window and noticed a blonde man with Jack in the back yard and listened to their conversation, while messing with things, since they both seemed to talk loud enough for it to go through the thin walls. 20
"So Benjamin, your Emmett's...Uncle?"I heard Jack ask, confused, I looked out the window through my curtain, trying to stay hidden. The other man had blonde and brown hair and golden brown eyes, he seemed serious and tired, and not interested. "Yes."His voice was rough and hard, and slightly bored. 21
I smirked, and felt sorry for the poor guy. "Well I better be going Mr, Norris. It was nice meeting you."He said and stood from one of the chairs in the back yard and looked up at my window and smirked. 22
My breath caught and I ran over to my bed, grabbing my notebook and drawing. Hoping Jack wouldn't come up and ground me for spying. I grabbed my mp3 and turned it on, listening hoping it would seem like I've been there for a while.23
Their was a knock on my door, and I sighed. "Come in!"I called out and looked at the door, biting my lip. Jack opened the door and raised a eyebrow."Were you spying...?"He asked and sat down on my bed. 24
I shook my head and looked up down at my notebook and my eyes went wide when I saw tons of hearts with the name Emmett in them, I turned the page as fast as I could before Jack could see. "No sir, I was fixing my curtain."I said and looked at him, his razor short hair, and brown eyes, almost reminded me of Emmett, only Emmett had golden brown eyes and Jack had hazel brown, and Emmett had pure black hair and Jack had brown. God I needed to stop thinking about Emmett 24/7.25
He sighed and then left my room, leaving me alone. I flopped back on my bed and sighed, falling into a small sleep.26
Author notes
Ok this one is shorter then normal and it was more about Emmett and Pandora's love life, and more about his family. The next chapter will hopefully be better, and also the horse, Arabella comes up later on in the story.
I had a hard time looking up names like Cordelia and Benjamin that relate around the 1800's but you'll see why I had to have names from around then later on. ;]
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Still liking it. Would like to see a bit more into Pandora's attitudes and thoughts, would like to see some other expressions on your characters' faces other than smirks. and also need to watch your pluralization of words that are supposed to be singular. Meaning watch where you put your "s".
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This is getting better and better Alex. Can't wait to see what's up next. Pandora's an intriguing character. And what's up with Jack and Benjamin? This really has me curious.


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Awesome!!!! I loved it!!!!!!!!!!! Hehe Shes such a dork..lol. There were a few spelling mistakes but not very many. I love how you worded this piece, it really flowed well. Great job! I'll be waiting for chapter 4!!!!


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hehe, it's Great. In paragraph 25 you wrote certain, I believe you ment it to be curtain. Can't wait for more.
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Yay! I loved it! Great! In "26" paragraph, you need to change "-left my room, leaving "my" alone.". Need to change the 'my" to a 'me'!
lol, otherwise, fantastic jobs!

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