drama of guys ~aka my ex~

my heart breaks from the lies u drag across my wrist1

my eyes awake to all the pain when u put me thru this2

when you cheat when you lie when you make me cry3

when your not the one holding me as i die4

this is for all the love ive felt for you5

love ill never feel again nothing was true6

nothing will ever be the same again7

now its all over with8

and when the scarlet blood slides down9

and your stil not around10

you'll confirm how you truly feel11

and ill realize that it was never real12

yet now i have someone more than just a friend13

mayb i might get my fairytale happy at the end14

and maybe my dreams might come true 15

and if not its all because of you16

Author notes

jus a poem cuz i feel like beating the hell outta my ex cuz for sum odd reason hes pissing me off..idk y. lol. i havent even talked to him since october but its getting near the time we broke up and im getten memories from wen we were going out...and now i hav sum1 else now who i really love and thats going much better so i dont really care about him ..i jus felt like releasing sum issues..good or bad comments i accept...blessed b all...shawna

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  • lost conscious
    March 6, 2005
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    ooooo I loved this poem very much... ex boyfriends...hmmm...lets not get started, I could go on forever about how guys have serious issues (more than us ladies).
    well thank you for sharing and I enjoyed reading this, the flow was brillant, rhythme didn't miss a beat, and my imagination seemed to find every line.
    ty again for sharing with us.
    ~'~lost conscious~'~

  • Silent Beauty
    March 6, 2005
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    Really nice poem. EX'S can be serious pains in the butts sometimes. I've my share of them. Well nice poem. Really enjoyed the read. Serena*