Razor Sharp Kiss - Chapter Two

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I didn't sleep at all that night, and I had to cover up the mirror with a blanket. I saw Emmett in the mirror, he had been in my room...or so I thought. I dressed hurriedly, in a Good Charlotte black shirt, blue jeans, and my black converses.

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I brushed my hair out and put it in a ponytail, and didn't even bother with my face. I wanted out of the room.
I ran down the stairs, and into the kitchen. Mom was setting things up but gave me five bucks to get food down at Publix.

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Daniel and David ran in with their own money and gave it to me, and whispered the words "Ice Cream please" to me as I left the house. I smirked and got on my bike, kicking the kick stand up and headed out of the yard.

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I started down the street, making sure I didn't look over at the smaller, blue wood house, across the street from me. I shuddered and started towards town, and  pulled my headphones out of my pocket, and turned my music on, not looking where I was going and going down on the ground, groaning. "Damn it...what the hell..."I said through gritted teeth and looked at the other person on the ground, and caught my breath. Emmett.

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"Damn Pandora don't you ever watch what your doing?"He said and stood up, brushing the dirt off him. I held a hand up in protest but shouted out in pain and grabbed my wrist. "You shouldn't have been walking in front of me.."I said almost a hiss, which made him narrow his eyes, but he looked at my wrist, guilt almost painted over his face.

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"Sorry.."He mumbled and grabbed my wrist, making me curse again. "Sprang..."He said again after feeling it for anything broken. "I'll be fine..."I said and pulled my hand away, I didn't want the freak to suck my blood or something.

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I stood up and picked my bike back up, sitting back down on it, wincing when I turned my wrist. "You should get something around that."He said and smirked, when I rolled my eyes, even though I agreed. "Yeah yeah I know. Fine doctor come with me to the store."I muttered and started going down the street slowly, and Emmett followed. We were quiet until we got to Publix, and he dragged me to the Isle with ace bandages and all that crap.

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After I got the things I wanted he payed for the bandages feeling sorry for making me crash, even though now I felt guilty since I should have been watching where I was going. I got my brothers a tub of ice cream even though mom would be pissed, and I would get a small burger at the MC.Donald's next door.

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Emmett wrapped my hand up to were it would stay still most of the time, and I went over and ate. He wouldn't let me leave before he check my bike out. "Oh god your just as bad as my mother! Its freaking fine!"I protested. "Chill out! I just wanna make sure nothing was messed up when we crashed into each other! god what is it your period?"He said and smirked.

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That had done it for me. One, you never publicly embarrass me Two, you never talk about that in public, and Three, never tell me to chill out. I had hit him with my sprang hand but it was me who got hurt, not him, he didn't even wince. I yelled out in pain and grabbed at my hand as sharp pain ran through it. I had freaking broke it hitting him, how the hell did I break it hitting him in the chest?

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I looked up at him, glaring, but my look turned into confusion when I saw the look of horror on his face. "Shit..."He breathed and grabbed my hand, popping my broken bones in place. I screamed, and bit my lip hard to not scream even more. "Are you freaking nuts?!"I breathed through my teeth.
"Do you want your mother to see your hand broken?!"He snapped and let me hand go. I shook my head at that thought and sat down, holding my hand.

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"Your freaking nuts....you freaking idiot..."I muttered and moaned when a sharp pain went through my hand again. I glared up at him, and as he sat down next to me. "I'm sorry...Not my fault that your so weak you broke your hand trying to hit me..."He mumbled, but it didn't sound like a insult.

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I narrowed my eyes, and stood up grabbing my bike and got on, and toke off from there, ignoring my wrist, and hand. I got into the yard and just got off my bike not bothering with the kick stand and went inside, the ice cream was melted but the twins didn't care. They said they'd drink it.

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A hour after I had got home and was done, making up a story to my mom on how I sprang my wrist, I headed up to my room, and took a shower, trying to clear my head. I took a towel and wrapped it around me and headed out my bath room, but stopped when I saw Emmett sitting at my desk and turned red, and went back into my bathroom.

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"Sorry!"I heard through the door as I got dressed.
I was going to get my brush that I had forgotten, but not like that. Not while hottie jerk was out there, but his face was still stuck in my head. He didn't even go red...he seemed pleased, but sorry. Both of that pissed me off.

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I headed out of my bathroom after dressing in a black tanktop, and purple gym like shorts, I grabbed my brush and brushed my hair, roughly. I looked at Emmett while doing it, glaring slightly. "What are you doing here?"I asked, only it seemed more like a commanded that he tell me.

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He stared at me then answered, his face was no longer pleased, or sorry. More...interested. "I wanted to make sure your hand was OK." He said and followed my hand as I brushed my hair, with his eyes.

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"Its fine."I replied and winced as I pulled my hair. "Here let me.."He said and stood up, taking the brush and brushing it through my hair softly and slowly.

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I didn't know how to react other then thinking "What the hell?" over and over in my head, I closed my eyes though as it felt good, after killing my head from pulling it so hard, but what was running through my head was "What the freaking hell?! shouldn't I push this freak away!?" but oddly..what I wanted to do was push him against a wall...

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He pushed my hair to my left and put his lips to my neck, making a shudder go down my spine, I felt him smirk. I turned around, opening my eyes, but finding his lips to mine, almost as soon as I turned around, I wrapped my arms around his neck, as his arms went around my waist.

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"Pandora?"I heard my mom say while coming up the stairs. Emmett pulled away and glared at the door. "Damn it.."He whispered, and pushed me away slightly and sat down at my desk again. I opened my door, as mom knocked. "Yea?"

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"Did you get your brothers ice cream?"She asked and crossed her arms. "Nope. Ask Jack."I said, and swifted my weight, putting my hand on my hip. She stared at me for a minute, and then nodded. "Alright.."She muttered and headed back down the stairs.

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I shut the door, and headed towards Emmett, and he stood up. He pulled me close again and kissed me fastly and then headed out of the room. "See ya."He said and grinned a side ways grin, and I listened to him head down the stairs, and tell my mom good bye. I flopped down on my bed. "What...just...happened..."I sighed.
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I laid in my bed, reading and looked up at the mirror, this time I wouldn't be scared...I mean I made out with the guy didn't I? I had pulled the sheat off and, had been looking up from my book to look at it just to see, ever five minutes.

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Finally around eleven I turned my lights out and covered up, and looked at the mirror one last time. This time I saw Emmett again, and caught my breath and looked at the desk, he really was there, smirking and shirtless. My eyes went wide and I sat up. "E-Emmett...?"I breathed and watched him stand up, and walk over to me. He over towered me, and kissed me, as we laid down again.

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I shot up gasping for breath as I looked around. It was a dream...no Emmett. No Mirror Emmett. Just me and my romance book sitting on my lap. God...Did I have it that bad?

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  • Raeyle
    October 5

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    Okay. I'm loving the story line, Loving the plot, starting to understand the main character. So KUDOS for that.

    Here's my few issues.lol. dont worry it's not like a shopping list.
    1. Spelling- most glaring being sprang for sprained- I assume. It kinda threw me off a bit in my reading.

    2. What kind of broken arm did she have? You can't put it back into place without some kind of splint or what not to make sure the bone heals as straight as possible. So I'm assuming you meant she dislocated her elbow or shoulder, which would have been just as plausible if she hit her arm into a vampire's strong chest and that could have been popped back into place.

    3. Grammar- umm you need to look up synonyms for words. He kissed her quickly works for what i think you mean, since the word fastly means firmly in archaic english and since most of your readers wouldn't know that, you may want to check the meanings of some of your adverbs.

    Those are the main things i think you can improve.

    I'm liking the story, despite these problems, because I can see where with development and editing it can go. So keep writing and blessings with it.


  • ToxicBlood
    September 15
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    very nice.


  • SnowFlakeWolf Greeters member
    September 1

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    Again, really really good. The spelling is a lot better in this chapter. I want to see where this progresses. So far, so good. It's really got my interest. I want to know who and what Emmett is.


  • Cheerful-Panda
    August 28

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    I didn't want the freak to suck my blood or something.

    Oooh do I sense some foreshadowing or is this just me
    Anyway I love the arguments between Emmett and Pandora (excuse my spelling its late) I love their names too oh so unique! Anyhoo my loving child this story is good and you've managed to hook me! So keep up the good work I will get around to reading more !

    -Mira

  • WOW!!!!! You have to keep writting this!!!!!! I'm hooked!! I love it! You have such great description, and I absolutely love this story! Please continue!!!


  • Rearose
    August 20
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    Awww

    OH wow!! Aww! I loved this!! Awesome! Write more!!

    • Lol thank you. This and the first chapter are the longest ones I've ever wrote, so don't worry I'll be writing more soon...8D

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