Razor Sharp Kiss - Chapter one


Moving from Wisconsin to Kansas isn't fun at all, and it doesn't help when your in a van with your annoying twin bothers, annoying over protective mother whos almost always on the phone with your step father whom you hate thats driving the moving truck in the back.
Also doesn't help when your sixteen, and your parents make you move states away from all your best friends, and the guy you really really liked, also doesn't help when you just turned sixteen today. I may sound like a whiney normal teenagers but whatever I have my reason.

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"Pandora?"I heard the twins ask at the same time and turn around, but I knew better to not look up or I could have two red plastic arrows stuck to my forhead with 8 year olds spit, or chips thrown at me, I went back to drawing in my notebook but turned my mp3 music down. "What." I said in a normal flat, blunt, touch me and die voice.
"Um...we were wondering...if you'd give us a mustach? like grandpa? with your make up..."David said, his voice hestanting, but I looked up, and his smile went wide, with victory.

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I stared at them both, both of their blonde shaggy hair was in their dark blue eyes, and their tooth smile made me laugh slightly, god they looked so much like Dad. No not Jack, my step father. My real dad, Mitcheal, he was a fire fighter that died trying to save others in 9/11, but the only way I looked like dad was because I had his shade of blue eyes, Aqua blue but the boys had almost a navy like blue, but I had mothers chestnut brown hair.

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I sighed and took my make up bag out from in my backpack, and took out my black eyeliner, and drew "french" mastaches on them. Ok so Grandpa didn't have a french mustache but hey I figured they'd have more fun with that. They smiled widely when they looked at each other. "Thanks sis!"They said and turned back around, saying things in a bad french accent.

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I rolled my eyes and looked back at my notebook and turned "Sober" by Kelly Clarkson on and turned the volume loud enough to were it blocked out my family, and drew a heart in cobweb and gaint spider headed towards it, hungry.
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"We're here!"I heard my mother through my headphone shout through my car side window. I sighed and turned off my mp3 and threw it in my backpack, and slid my car door open and got out.

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I stared at the gothic old victorian house, it looked like it needed a gaint dust buster took to it, and many tools. The grass was browned dead, and the trees had cobwebs and moss all over. The roof seemed to falling apart (I hoped it didn't rain for a while) and the old door was wide open as Jack was going in and out with our boxes.6

"Piece of crap isn't it?"I said in a bored tone. "Stop being such a teenagers Pandora."Jack said and smirked. I rolled my eyes and  looked up at the top attic room window with yellowed certans. "My room. I call it."I said to my family, and the boys protested and started in the house. (I thanked god for the three years of soccer I took and that I was closer to the house then them) and I raced in the house and up the stairs.

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I ran into the room and locked the door. (Hell I was shocked it had a lock and that the floor didn't give out on me)
I stared around the room, and tried to not touch anything. The air and room was coated in dust, making me cough so I wouldn't choke.

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There was a long yellowed sheat covering something under it, I coughed as I pulled it off and tons of dust went flying, there was a broken long mirror under it, making my long body seem deformed when I looked at it.

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My long brown hair went past my shoulder, and my red tanktop went of the top of my Levi jeans, that were fading in the knee part, my sneakers were dirty, with the dirt from outside. My almond shaped blue eyes seemed tired, I never realized how much I looked like my mother till then. I had the same heart shaped face, with a perfect jaw line to go with it.

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My face was kind and soft even though I didn't feel like it right then, my skin was a fair olive andmy eyebrows thin and slightly a lighter brown then my hair. My eyelashs were dark, but the odd thing was...I was mad that I looked alot like my mother.

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I turned away from the mirror and almost screamed when I saw someone at my door. "Sorry!...Your father sent me up here to help when I came over to see if I could do anything..."The boy said fastly, his black hair in his golden brown eyes, his jaw line perfect and strong, and his skin palers the normal, he seemed strong and nice, but something about him didn't seem...right.

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"Oh...wait...how did you get in the room...I locked it."I said and narrowed my eyes and crossed my arms across my chest. Another mother thing, damn. "It wasn't locked."He said confused, and shoke his head. "Look...do you want help or what?" I rolled my eyes and turned back to the mirror and touched a small piece it cutted my hand.

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"Damn!"I shouted and grabed my hand as it bleed, as I turned the boy was by me and held his hand out. "Can I see...?"He said softly and looked at me, his golden eyes seeming to go right through me.
I nodded and held my out to where he could see, and touched it lightly but stopped when I sucked in my breath sharply. "Sorry.."He mumbled and took something from his pocket, it was a white rag and wrapped it around my hand.

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"Thanks...I guess I sould get this mirror out of here later..."I said and sighed, for some reason I really liked this mirror...odd. He smiled making me almost melt, but I did when I saw his shirt was open, showing his abs and chest, perfect body.

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I gulped and pulled my hand away. "Um...lets go help Jack.."I said and left the room and headed down the stairs, I heard him right behind me, and sighed, walking out, my mom seeing my hand and headed right to me, grabbing my hand. "Pandora what did you do?!"She said and went to the car taking out the first aid kit and patched my hand up.

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"She didn't see a piece of glass in her room, and it cut her, but I got it out. Mrs, Norris."He said and I saw almost laughed at our last name. Jack Norris...ugh."Thank you Emmett."She said and smiled, and let my hand go, I raised my eyebrow, and smirked.

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"Emmett?" He smirked back. "Pandora?"Yes both of our names were...different.
Later on in the day after he helped my set my room up for heavy parts, and helped Jack move things in he had to leave. He winked at me and ran across the yard over to the small farm across the street.
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I slipped my white tanktop, and pink soft PJ bottoms on, and laid down on my bed, staring at the broken mirror that I told my mom I wanted.

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I promised her I wouldn't touch it, and she let me keep it. I looked away to turn my light off and looked back, catching my breath when I saw Emmett in the mirror, sitting on my desk to my left, I turned my head but saw no one, but what had scared me more was when sudden thunder and lighten struck, and it started pouring. What had I seen...

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  • SnowFlakeWolf Greeters member
    September 1

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    This is really really good. You should check some of your spelling, but aside from that, it's awesome. your detail in the story is really good through most of it. Actually, I couldn't really find fault with it. It's a lot better than mine, truthfully. Anyways, can't wait to read the next chapter. Great story sis.


  • Cheerful-Panda
    August 27

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    Ohh ver nice, and the part towards the end where she saw him sent chills down my spine.

    Good start here ex daughter I plan to read more.

    James: How come this story isn't about me?
    Me: -__- He has ego issues I think I shall tazer him.
    James: MEEP

    Nice write daughter
    Your ex mad dad
    Mira !

    • It did? COOL! 8D -gets bat and glares at James- Nobody wants to write a story about a playboy like you James. -__-

      -Meeeeee

  • punk.chick
    August 26
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    i liked it xD !!


  • ToxicBlood
    August 23

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    Pretty cool. But be careful with some of the spelling. like sheet, and instead of "cutted" it'd be "cut". Other than that it's pretty good.

  • This is good, I like it =DD. It's well written, and keeps the readers intrest. I think it's a great start for a book, really good job, Keep writing =DD.

  • This is really cool. I loved the mystery surrounding Emmet. It's great and I would love to read more

    Just one thing i noticed sometimes you forget to start a new paragraph when a different person startst to speak. It confused me a couple times as to who was the speaker, but other then that it's a fantastic story!

    . Rewarded 6

  • WOW!!!!! I loved this!! Absolutely loved it!! Its so mysterious. I love the description you gave, and how you expresses what Pandora was feeling! Awesome job! I really hope you continue this I would love to read more! Greaet job!

    . Rewarded 4


  • Rearose
    August 20
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    Oo!

    Ooo!! I like this A LOT!! Really really good!

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