"Durch Fremde Hand" (By Strangers Hands) [Jane]

THIS DID NOT HAPPEN TO ME--IT'S FICTION1

I've always been captivated by strangers. Why do you think I spend so much time fiddling around on sites like MySpace and Vampirefreaks? I don't trust much of anyone here in my part of New Jersey because everyone in my part of New Jersey has betrayed me in someway. I can't trust my parents, so I turn to the six billion people of the world for comfort. Maybe one of them will take me in.2

I started talking to Daniel a few months ago on MySpace because he liked what I had to say and because I was hot (he said to me). You see, I'm very opinionated and I like what I have to say be it on religion or anything else.3

Back to the story.4

Daniel and I met a year later.5

"You're beautiful, Jane.," he told me.6

"Thank you," I said, blushing heavily.7

"You're welcome. I don't know much about New Jersey. What do you say we go to my hotel and you tell me about it?"8

"Sure!," I said, lighting up like a a light bulb, "I'd like that."9

****10

When we got to his room, he roughly pushed me down on the bed and started to undress.11

"What the fuck are you doing?," I exclaimed.12

"Getting undressed. Why?"13

"Just wondering. I mean, I know you like to walk around naked, but I just thought..."14

"Never in front of a girl? Yeah? Well, Jane, you thought wrong." He started to get in bed and get on top of me. 15

"Undress! Now!," he barked. I got scared and immediately obeyed. When I was undressed, he pushed me back on the bed and began raping me.16

"Please! No! Please, stop!," I cried, but he kept pumping in and out of me. 17

"I'm not stopping, bitch! You shouldn't have made me fall for you!," he grunted, pumping in and out of me. I could feel something wet and I had a feeling that he broke my hymen. 18

"Keep your head on the pillow!," he roared at me, getting ready to do something with his hands. Was he about to choke me?19

"I'm not about to choke you," he said as though he was reading my mind. "I just want you more involved in this matter, Janey. You know what I'm saying.20

"No...please stop, Daniel...I don't want this!" I cried again. He slapped me.21

"I'm not stopping you pathetic slut!"22

"Please...please stop...," My strength was quickly fading. All of my screaming must have done it. He pulled out of me with a content look on his face. 23

"Nice meeting you, Jane," he said as he left me with my pants on the ground and me, naked, on the bed with no way home.24

Author notes

See what meetings on the Internet can do? I've only done it once with a friend my friend Chris set me up with.

Option 1

**Not every meeting turns out like Jane's**

--Aden

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  • Vampiric souls
    August 26
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    wow for something so short this was great.. so well written and interesting, !!!!!1 Great Job!!


  • La Maravilla
    August 20
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    *makes shocked face*

    this was quick...but very powerful...

    did this happen to you???


    • AdenRecreated
      August 20
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      This did not happen to me.

      I should put that in my Author's Notes to clarify--thanks.

      --Aden


      • La Maravilla
        August 20
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        okay...i was totally freaking out for a minute...

        made me double think myspace for a split second lol!