Eyes:Chapter One:First Love

(Disclaimer:I Do Not Own The Show Naruto,Neither Any Songs That May Show Up.I Only Own My OCs:Nyoko,Nichi,Akiko,Khana,Ayume,Hana,Saruko,Haru,Leiko,& Masago)1

"Talking" 'Thoughts Or Journal Entries' (My Comments Or Info)2

(Tenten's POV Of March 15th)3

'In His Eyes,I Am Weak'4

I Watched Neji Spend Time Training With His Older Half-Sister Masago.5

'In His Eyes,I Just Fill In The Gap In Our Team'6

I Watched Them Carefully,Noticing Neji's Every Move Was Blocked By Rotation Or An Arm.7

'In His Eyes,I Am Worthless'8

I Started To Walk To The House I Shared With What Has Left Of My Family.Just To See Their Faces.......It Makes Me Think I Exist,& Am Worth Something.9

'In His Eyes,I Do Not Exist......'10

When I Arrived Home,I Am Always Greeted By The Rest Of My Family.My Three Cousins,& My One Sister.After I Had My Reheated Ramen,I Went To My Room To Be Alone,& To Listen To One Of My Sad Songs;Hear me.By Kelly Clarkson.11

'You Gotta Be Out There'12

'You Gotta Be Somewhere'13

'Where ever You Are'14

'I'm Waiting.......'15

'Cause There Are Nights When'16

'I Sing Myself To Sleep'17

'And Hoping My Dreams Bring'18

'You Close To Me'19

'Are You Listening?'20

(Chorus)21

'Hear Me,I'm Cryin Out'22

'I'm Ready Now'23

'Turn My World Upside Down'24

'Find Me'25

'I'm Lost In The Crowd'26

'Its Getting Loud'27

'I Need You To See'28

'I'm Screamin For You To Please'29

'Hear Me'30

'Can You Hear Me?'31

'I Used To Be Scared Of'32

'Letting Someone In'33

'But It Gets So Lonely'34

'Being On My Own'35

'With No One To Talk To And'36

'No One To Hold Me'37

'I'm Not Always Strong'38

'Oh I Need You Here'39

'Are You Listening?'40

(Chorus)41

'Hear Me,I'm Cryin Out'42

'I'm Ready Now'43

'Turn My World Upside Down'44

'Find Me'45

'I'm Lost In The Crowd'46

'Its Getting Loud'47

'I Need You To See'48

'I'm Screamin For You To Please'49

'Hear Me'50

'Can You Hear Me?'51

'I'm Restless And Wild'52

'I Fall,But I Try'53

'I Need Someone To Understand'54

'(Can You Hear Me?)'55

'I'm Lost In My Thoughts'56

'And Baby I've Fought'57

'For All That I Got'58

'Can You Hear Me?'59

'Hear Me'60

'Hear Me'61

'Hear Me'62

'Can You Hear Me?'63

'Hear Me'64

'Hear Me'65

'Can You Hear Me?'66

'Ohohhohhohoh'67

'ohohohohoh'68

'Hear Me'69

'Hear Me'70

(Neji's POV Of March 15th)(Why March?I Was Born In March,That's Why)71

'In Her Eyes,I Am Emotionless'72

I Was Sparring With My Elder Half Sister Uchiha/Hyuga Masago.& If I Was Watching Myself,I Would Look Like I'm Loosing.73

'In Her Eyes,I Am Cold'74

I Lost That Day,Lost Sight Of Tenten,My Teammate,Sparring Partner,Friend,& I Lost That Battle.I Don't Know What Hurts More.Loosing To My Sister,Or Knowing That Tenten Didn't Stay Till The End.(Me:Even Though He Got His Butt Kicked!!)75

'In Her Eyes,I Am Nothing'76

I Parted Ways With My Sister When She Had Gotten A Summon From The Lady Hokage.Every Mission I Knew That She May Not Return From It.But,She Is ANBU.There Is Nothing That I Can Do About That.77

'In Her Eyes,I Am Lost'78

I Walked Home Soon After That.Returning To My Home To See My Uncle,My Two Cousins,& My Step-brother Uchiha Sasuke.I Quickly Went To Bed That Night,I Did Not Want To Talk To My So Called Step-brother.79

(Masago's POV On March 16)(the Next Day)80

'I Watch,I Wait,I Try,I Want To See Them Together,Even Friends,As Long As They talk To Each Other.....Tenten....Neji.....'81

As I Pack Up,I Spy Neji's Journal.Even Though I Shouldn't Have Read It, I Did.82

'Journal Entry,March 15:83

Today I Was Beaten By My Sister Again.84

Good Thing That She's Not The Type To Brag,Unlike SOME People(Me:Sasuke)85

Of ALL People,Why Does HE Have To Be My Step-brother?86

Tenten Didn't Watch Until The End......87

I Don't Think She Likes Me......88

But I Like her,Maybe Even Love Her.89

I Wish I Could Tell Her,But Every Time I Try......I Fails.....90

I Might be Able To Tell Her Tomorrow....91

Just Maybe....92

Hyuga Neji'93

'hmmmmm......'I Thought'I Wonder If Tenten Feels The Same Way......'94

(Tenten's Older Sister's POV(Not Telling You The Name Yet)On March 16)95

As I Was Walking Around The House I See Tenten's Diary,I ALWAYS Read Her's.That's How I know Her problems.I Still Think She Thinks I Can Read Minds.96

'Dear Diary,97

Today I Watched Masago & Neji Spar Together.98

Masago Always Has The upperhand Because She Can Read Attacks.99

I Wish I Could Do That.....100

It'd Make Me Alot More Useful To The Team......101

I Couldn't Stay Till The End Of Their Battle....102

I Know For Sure That Neji Didn't Want Me There.....103

To Witness His defeat......104

I Really Like him,But He's Always So Cold To Me....105

I Love Him,I Really Do......106

I Try To Tell Him But.....107

I Don't Think He Listens....108

I'll Try To Tell Him Someday....109

I Just Know It!!110

Miritashi Tenten'

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  • YukilovesShino
    October 2
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    YAY!

    GOODIES!!!

  • Smile people
    August 31

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    Your story is cool, some what confusing but cool. I hope you wirte more and have time to do so.


  • AkikoLovesGaara
    August 20
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    Oh Yes.....I'm Gonna Have You People Who Read This Guess Who Tenten's Sister In My Fanfics Is!!!Ok....Does The Last name Miritashi Ring A Bell In The Anime?


  • AkikoLovesGaara
    August 18
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    heh......Took Me Two 1/2 Days To Do This Because I Had To Get On & Off The Computer.I Think It Turned Out Pretty Well.(I Hope)