The Monsters in Your Head

-Opening is a Chant-
Sleep Well, Sleep Tight
Silently throughout the night
.
Hush now, quiet down
Voices haunting this whole town
.
Sad hearts, closed eyes
Can you hear all of their cries?
-Opening Ends-1

In the darkness they will hide
Off your soul they shall thrive
Clutch your heart and squeeze it tight
Put an end to you tonight
.
You can't ever win this game
Demons lurk all around
Under children's beds are they
In the closets, come and play
.
Mocking laughter in your mind
Taunting you, no need for sound
So amused at your dismay
Will you make it until day?
.
Chorus:
Monsters in your head
Want to end your life
Can you see through them?
Can you see the light?
Can you see the light?
.
Hold your breathe and close your eyes
Try not to make a sound
They are looking for you now
How you'll live, you don't know how
.
Against the door is scratching
Throughout the wind are howls
There you are, frozen in place
Are you ready for the chase?
.
Finally they have found you
A hunger in their eyes
Run from them as you do try
If they catch you, you will die
.
Chorus:
Monsters in your head
Want to end your life
Can you see through them?
Can you see the light?
Can you see the light?
.
Opened eyes, you awaken
With your heart beating fast
Can you not see its a dream?
All that it is is a dream
.
Most vulnerable asleep
Strongest when you awaken
Don't let your monsters have you
Don't let them take you over
.
Don't fear opening your eyes
Never fear falling asleep
It ends when you awaken
It will all be over then
.
Chorus:
Monsters in your head
Want to end your life
Can you see through them?
Can you see the light?
Can you see the light?
It will end when you awaken

Author notes

I didn't think I did TOO bad with this lyrics, since I normally do really bad with them T_T But the idea behind it was cool... What do you think? And please please please comment with an opinion... I don't care if its bad, just be blunt and honest!!!

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  • Noisome.
    August 18, 2008

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    I really like this. o.o
    Your chorus was a tad short, and slightly repetitive, but I think the song gives a good illusion and it has a crazy good effect. I mean.. kinda shiver-y. I like that it's kinda.. explaining. You're strongest when awake.. and vulnerable when asleep... I like that..