Little Mr.President sits in the old money tree.
Merry President of the country is he. 1
Laugh, Mr.President,2
Laugh, Mr.President,
Gay your life must be.3
Little Mr.President sits in the old money tree,
Taking all the money he can see.4
Stop, Mr.President,5
Stop, Mr.President,
Leave some there for me.
Author notes
This is only for some of the president. You might disagree with me in some way, Its ok, every one has thier own opinion. lol
Butchered: Kookaburra
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- What Little Bo Peep Really Wanted by heartfullofvenom.
400 points, ended September 11, 2008, 20 entries
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the president wold sit in a tree and count money. this was pretty interesting/awesome. but this was a little wierd but still good
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Hey thnks for commenting again lol!
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lol, I can see the president sitting in his money tree counting away. Then you at the foot of the tree trying to catch some green..... good job!
beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.
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hey, thanks for reading this buddy. it just a little something i thought of the president.
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OOh! I loved it. Very nice political view, and great redo of kookaburra. They made me sing that in chorus once.
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funny but wierd story!!!
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*chuckles to myself* I loved this! It was very humorous and witty, yet serious at the same time. Nice! I enjoyed reading this very much so! Bravo!
Ps. thanks for commenting on my story "Edlin, spy by day and nurse by night. lol
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Wow, this is amusing as hell (all though hell isn't that amusing...)! I really love the last two lines! :] This made me smile, awesome job.
Cheers,
Sky♥Prince
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Thanks for reading and commenting sky Prince. Glad you liked it.
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I liked this! It was interesting and dealt with serious stuff in a humurous way. Another quirky poem - good job.
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I liked this! It was interesting and dealt with serious stuff in a humurous way. Another quirky poem - good job.
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Interesting......
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I don't disagree. I liked how you wrote it. It was serious, with a comical side. Nice twist, and cool background to compliment the rhyme.
Good Luck!
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