Interrupted Dream

Hi everyone. My name is Leo Smith and I am a dreamer. 1

In the morning I am awakened by the shrill shout or the punch of a stranger. A crowd races before me like the wind and I am left moaning everyday. Young children avoid me like the plague or tiny insects. I live on scraps and if I’m lucky, some leftovers from the putrid bins to satisfy my growling stomach – it’s all I have and I’m ashamed of myself.2

That is my rhythmic routine. That, and lying on the dirt-roofed ground with lucid piteous eyes, hushing my hunger and dreaming with my only friends – the stars up high – while streams of ignominy and fury spill on my drab face.3

As the drowsiness around me hits the sheets and the night grows old, the radiant light full of beauty hypnotizes my mind and I rapidly travel among sprays of twinkling powder. Clouds of yearning screens come to me hastily and for a few moments, it all seems like a dream come true…4

'I feel the velvety touch of a benign hand and sense the immaculate smell of freshly prepared breakfast that makes my nostrils twitch and itch with eagerness. And then a loving voice like a symphony, 5

"Wake up, you sleepy dog!" utters my master with a wide passionate smile. I jump out of lethargy and lick my master with happy jolly eyes as I feel the smooth arms embracing me. 6

With echoing hops, I go to my haven where my treat awaits while yapping and woofing. The young girl follows me and stands near me, patting me and wishing me a great day (in her own human way) while wet patches form onto my fur as her mouth touches it. Soon, I see her leaving the house after waving me goodbye. 7

I scurry around the house in search for adventure. But before I know it, a taller human approaches me and gently grabs me in her hand like a baby. I realize it’s time for my first exciting activity of the day; bath time!! 8

I bound and skip in the bathtub while the very kind lady tries to control me with a huge smile on her face. The air becomes a universe of bubbles and my fur smells like perfect perfume. She dries my fur and brushes my hair and then, it’s time for my second adventure! A journey to the magnificent park!!9

I run without a break. I sense the liberate air and feel free, without cares. All the happiness in the world seems to be attracted to me like a beehive. I speed towards the river where the waterfall is and feel the breeze while I think about my family – It is all I need. Love spirals its way towards my heart and right there, I feel special, my life is a magical dream. 10

Subsequently, I catch a glimpse of that taller human that takes care of me and loves me and in her hand, I see a treasure. She approaches me and moves one of the ice creams towards my mouth. Its taste is glorious! 11

With an eye expression, I realize it is time to go back to my haven. And there, I find my young master anxiously awaiting my arrival. With my tongue hanging excitedly, I sprint towards her and love joins hands once again, like a miracle.12

The evening is my favourite part! It is the ultimate adventure because I never know what it is! I love surprises! Sometimes I get a humongous meal, others I accompany my family to a wonderful place and others, I lay next to my young master, where my enchanting world grows without boundaries. 13

And I cosily sleep, under a thick blanket and feel safely protected.' 14

Yes, stars, that is my ‘simple’ dream ’cause deep down, I know you’re not real.15

… ‘Hey, get off my yard, you menace to humanity!’ a stranger sadistically screams. I feel a slap on my right hand and a long solid stick, with sharp tines sticking out, smashing me on the head as I feel shivery lines of wet red paint fall along my brow and then, sprawled out on the floor, I feel dizziness take over…Goodbye dream.16

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  • Melancholic Smile
    September 22, 2008

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    I really liked this story and the ending was so sad. Sad as it was I felt it would have been better if just a few lines longer to show the intensity of the dog's fear and the actions of the sadistic stranger. It's a really good write and as I have 2 little dogs of my own it really saddens me that I know there are people out there who would be that cruel. On the other hand while you were describing the dreams of everything that made the dog happy I smiled knowing that is the normal life for my 2 pups so hopefully they are happy little dogs! I like this a lot - thanks for entering and good luck


  • ValkyrieNorn
    August 16, 2008

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    Oh, how depressing. They killed the dog.

    You write very well. It's very beautiful, but sad. Some of the words are a bit beyond my vocabulary, but I still understood. I think, though, that you might find other words that aren't necessarily simple, but just easier to blend into the story without a reader having to grab a dictionary.

    Good spelling, though. And grammar, too. Thanks for sharing!

    -Val