Cold Sun 4

She dug deeper and deeper...the more she cut, the better she felt. It was so easy to hurt herself...to end the pain even for just a couple of seconds, however, what she didn't know was that Darin wasn't exactly asleep.1

He was watching as she took the knife from him, thinking that he still knocked out in her chair.2

He watched in complete horror as she cut into her perfect olive skin,(oh such beautiful skin.)3

Hastly, he put out the thoughts of touching her...kissing her...loving her like she's never been loved.His last thought about her though was to grab the knife from her hand. He stood up with out thinking and...4

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  • social-chaos
    March 6, 2005
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    Excellent

    "stood up without thinking and..." What!!!!!!! Ahhhhh!!!! *goes to read more*

  • LadyWolf
    March 3, 2005
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    Ohhh that was so not nice!!! ending it like you did!!! WRITE MORE!! Please!!!