Achu High king of elven kings part 1

Once upon a time, in the world of Mirathil, in the elven city of Riverpool a queen gavebirth to a beautiful elven boy named Achu. Achu's birth was fortold to theh elves long ago as the king who would put an end to evil forever. He would be known by a silver start birthmark nest to his right eye. For two thousand years the king and Queen has one child after another wating for the child who would be their future high king. When the child and his twin brother were born runners were sent to all the elven kings and queens throughout the world that they would all know of their baby brother's birth.1

Achu grew strong and healthy. He loved to play and he loved to learn. At age three Achu's father began to teach Achu the science of healing for all elven kings are healers. Achu picked up the information he was taught at amazing speed so that by the age of thirteen there was nothing left for anyone to teach him. That was when Achu's father gave Achu a gift passed on only to high kings. Achu was given all the knowledge and wisdome of all the elven kings who had ever lived. This was given to him through a mind meld with his father, and afterwards Achu was silent for almost a month as he processed all the information that was given to him.2

After his month of silence Achu returned to playing with his friends Zachary, Legall, and Atta. The four spent hours in the woods playing games such as blind man's bluff, hide and seek, and other childrens games. To Achu, life seemd like it would be wonderful and perfect forever. Sadly, such was not the case.3

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