The Monster

Once upon a time their lived a family,that lived in a villiage by the mountain, were no one had eber dared to set foot on. Because legends had it their was a monster living in the mountain. So one day the family decided to have a picnic on the mountain not knowing the legends. so the mom packed the picnic basket and they went to the top of the mountain to the picnic grounds. Some of the other families told them to be quit because they were going to wake the mountain monster up but they did not top singing. So a horrible thing happened the mouster woke up by all the singing and destroyed the picnic grounds, but when he herd a la a by the monster started to go back to sleep and went back to the cave were he lives. The town was saved from the monster and fave the family a reward for it.

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