so this one time marco (his name is marco) came home and saw his mom had become dead but he wasnt scared cuz he new 911 and would help him if he called 911. but the Phone was dead and wouldnt ring and the police didnt kno hes callin so they couldnt send anyone to help marco and his moms.1
so then he was crazy but his mom it turns out that she was killed by a vampirea nd some of the blood got on him so whe was a crazy vampire who killd peppl.2
In case you haven't realized it, the mad villain is the author, and its victim is the English language.
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lol! You made it sound funny but good at the same time. A few spelling errors tho, oh well. Good Job! :]
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Hey, this was really wierd. I must say, the point was proven VERY well. I thought that was rubbish, until I read the very end.
Bravo.
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wowww
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Genius. Utter genius. What's sad is that this type of work makes up a good percentage of teenage internet writings these days. Such a sad shame. The only mistake you made was that you spelled stuff far too correctly. Everything needs to be so destroyed that you have to look at a word for ten minutes to figure out what the hell it is supposed to be.
I'm a member of a group, the Fanfiction Sclock, where we provide links to the scum of fanfiction. If you'd like to join, could you perhaps put this on the Reading List? It would provide quite a laugh to the members.
Well, wonderful and insightful piece! I do hate the cliches the people of today have imposed on the world of literature.
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