BB Good (Chapter 5)

JOE'S POINT OF VIEW1

What happened? I thought she did want to be with me, now she didn't? 2

When we went on stage "Kevin what did you say to Lizzie!?" I practically shouted at him. 3

"I told her to break up with you because you and I both she's just another video girl!"He shouted back. 4

"Kevin, WHY would you do that?" Nick interupted. 5

"So, hurting me would be better for you?" I snapped at him6

"Are you gonna let some stupid girl come between us?" He snapped at me. 7

"Well, maybe I am. I mean at least she cares for me more than my own brother!." I was furious. Forget the stupid sound check I went backstage to find Lizzie. 8

"I heard you guys fighting. " She whispered. 9

"Don't listen to Kevin, He's not really important. 10

"He's your brother and he hates me." 11

"So who cares what he thinks?" 12

"I do." 13

"Why does he hate me?" She wasn't even looking 14

I paused, "He thinks your just a video girl." 15

"He does?" I could tell it was hurting her. 16

"But it does matter what he thinks cause I know your not." I tried to put her hands together.17

"I don't want to come between you and your brothers." 18

"Are you gonna leave?" I felt a pain so sharp and I wanted to kill Kevin for doing this. 19

"No, but we can't be together." and she walked out. 20

I couldn't go after her the concert was starting.

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  • Abbiee
    August 17, 2008
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    kevin ur such a jerk! get a life and leave lizzie and joe alone! ur a


  • sport-gurl-101
    August 13, 2008

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    nooooo wat is up with kevin. she is more than that she is not a 'video girl'
    ugh he can't let her go

    beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.


  • KaitieTheCheeto
    August 13, 2008

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    Nooo!
    Joe, you're just gonna let her walk out like that!?
    NO ONE CARES ABOUT YOUR CONCERT EXCEPT THE WHOLE UNIVERSE!
    Update soon!!!!!!!