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She danced because she knew that she was good. Her body simply moved effortlessly, flawlessly, with the fluidy and grace other dancers only dreamed of. But she always wondered whether she danced because she was good, or because she actually enjoyed it. And then one day, the new student at school was paired as her partner in class, and she had never seen his equal in grace or power. He moved as though born to it, like a dream made reality. She was humbled, she was enchanted, she fell in love. Dancing was suddenly new and incredible and ... challenging; she'd never been so happy as when life took on meaning and dimentions.
Author notes
I played with it a bit. Editting is a beautiful thing.
A contest entry
- RIDING TO SCHOOL ON A KANGAROO !!! by Prodigious.Mirth.
100 points, ended August 15, 2008, 5 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
Comments
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dimensions? Good read,so far. Poetic.Good story line--clean and easy to follow. Fluidity. take out And...Then one day. Overall it reads smoothly,ebbs and flows like the tide. Nicely,done.
beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5.
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Im taking your favoutrite words are: Ha ha! This was a fun little workout!
I do like this story. I love the enchanting theme of dance and love. I think there is such freedom in dance as well as writing and you executed it well.
Thank you for entering
Good luck
Blair
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