How can you build yourself, from the ground up, if when you're almost at the top, people come out from hiding behind the dark clouds and drop bricks while harsh words of you're-not-good-enough come rocketing out of their mouths like gunshots? 1
Maybe thats whats wrong with humanity.
Author notes
hey taylor!
well, okay, that was my entry (50 words! I counted, twice! 
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oh, and my gender...
FEMALE (or so my doctor said)
A contest entry
- Just... Words. by Taylor Renee.
350 points, ended August 16, 2008, 25 entries
Honorable mention
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
its practically impossible, unless you've got a bullet-proof vest.
Comments
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I love your notes, especially the doctor part =P. Your story is really good. FANTASTIC!!!!!!!!!!!!
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haha loved it! so true and so angering (if thats a word) and love the author notes funny love you!
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lol, thanks my friend (w/out braces
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and if angering is not a word, we'll go on a protest thing and make it one!!!!!!!!!!
love you and thanks for your beautiful && magnifique comment
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Hey!
Oh my goodness.
I absolutely love this.
As I've said to entries before; this is beautiful, in a heartwrenching kind of way.
It really makes me think.
And it's so incredibly true.
You wrote it perfectly; the wording was great.
And the last line? Sheer brilliance.
As well as your "its practically impossible, unless you've got a bullet-proof vest." <- Utter genius.
And your title.
Great work here. Really.
Thank you so much for taking the time for my contest, and I wish you the absolute best of luck.
xoxo
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Tay
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Thank You. Thank You. Thank You. I'm so glad you liked it!
Oh. And thanks for the genius compliment! Maybe i'm related to Albert Einstein, you know, just a thought...
And you are so welcome, I absolutely LOVE entering your contests! Wanna know why [extreme suckup alert!] 'cause you've got all these creative ideas, and you're always challenging my writing! So thanks for that!
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gio
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