He wrapped his arms eagerly around me, holding me close to his body. My arms made their way around him and I held him as tightly as I could manage.1
"I love you so much." he whispered in my ear.
Author notes
I'm a girl. 
I'm not really sure what's going on in the paragraph I wrote but I thought it turned out pretty cute. 
I hope you enjoy it as much as I did. 
A contest entry
- Just... Words. by Taylor Renee.
350 points, ended August 16, 2008, 25 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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I absolutely love this.
it's written wonderfully, and it makes me smile. It's very sweet, and it says a lot in just a few words; the idea of my contest.
Your wording is perfect
Thank you so much for taking the time for my contest, and I wish you the absolute best of luck.
xoxo
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Tay
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Thanks for the nice comment!
And thanks for allowing me to enter (by making the maximumm entries higher)
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You deserve it.
And you're welcome!
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