They had only agreed to meet for coffee, but he decided to find his tie and dress clothes anyway.1
Conor, however, showed up in a yellow t-shirt with a dinosaur.2
The dinosaur had a stupid grin, but Conor had a sunshine smile that left him tongue-tied.3
The dinosaur mocked him.4
Author notes
fifty words, according to MSWord. "T-shirt" and "tongue tied" count as one. Stupid dashes.
I'm a girl, by the way.
(Also, if you ignore this bit in parentheses, the author's note has twenty words. 
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A contest entry
- Just... Words. by Taylor Renee.
350 points, ended August 16, 2008, 25 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
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Comments
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You are so adorable. The intensity and sweetness grow with each word, but continue even after the last. Blundering and blushing.
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I love this.
I'm grinning right now, actually.
This was adorable, absolutely. So cute, and sweet, too.
I love the picture it puts in my head.
And the last line is genious
Oh, and your author's notes! Brownie points ^^
Thank you so much for taking the time for my contest, and I wish you the absolute best of luck!
xoxo
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Tay
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Oh, what a nice image you gave me. Quite humorous, this. I like laughing, so this gets brownie points with me. Well done.
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