The sky is cloudless, yet my heart is very darkened.
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I am a girl
A contest entry
- Just... Words. by Taylor Renee.
350 points, ended August 16, 2008, 25 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I like it!
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I absolutely love this, in a horrible way.
it's so empty and sad, but it's written beautifully. Flawlessly.
It's a gorgeous piece, and it leaves me feeling just the way it should.
It says so much in the few words you have, which is what it was supposed to do.
I hope it is not true.
Beautiful work.
Thank you so much for taking the time for me contest, and I wish you the absolute best of luck.
xoxo
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Tay
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Wow. The beauty of this is miraculous. I like that you took so few words and made me feel so empty inside. An excellent job! Well done!
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