A Life

It doesn’t matter. Does anything anymore? All the pain, all the sacrifice. Nothing will take it back, make it go away. But will it ever stop? Always have been, always will be: stuck between a rock and a hard place.

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A life...His life

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  • Taylor Renee
    August 12, 2008

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    I really, really love this.

    I agree completely with the previous comment. This is definitely written extremely well, and I love what it says. It's depressing, but one of those beautifully depressing pieces.

    If it's true, then I am sorry.

    It's still written perfectly, and it's original, and just wonderful. I love it.

    Thank you so very much for taking the time for my contest, and I wish you the absolute best of luck.

    xoxo
    -♥-
    Tay


  • Lady Eventide Greeters member
    August 12, 2008

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    Wow. Nice. I really like the way you wrote this...like with a sense of urgency. I think you'll go far with this. All the best.