"I hate you" cutts deep into my soul making my emotions seep out in retreat. My eyes soon lost its willing to fight for whats right and left to its usual deep lost gaze. You peer into them with hate and your eyes say nothing more but "Your a disgrace."
Author notes
Exactly 50 words! I'm a girl!
A contest entry
- Just... Words. by Taylor Renee.
350 points, ended August 16, 2008, 25 entries
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Comments
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This is very sad.
I feel the same way about that phrase, and I'm glad to see something this controversial here in my contest.
I really think you did a good job; great subject, it makes me want to know more.
Thank you so much for taking the time for my contest, and I wish you the absolute best of luck!
xoxo
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Tay
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This was cool and I feel the same way about the word I hate you. Well if it was from a person I love. If its from a person I didn't know it wouldn't matter as much. Great job!
Sabrina
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