I just wish you would have told me the truth.1
Now I have no reason to ever trust you again.
Author notes
Exactly 20 words!
I am a girl. Isn't it amazing? XD
A contest entry
- Just... Words. by Taylor Renee.
350 points, ended August 16, 35 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
PLEASE COMMENT AND CRITICIZE.
Comments
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I liked it. BETRAYAL! Nuu!~ But this one was unique in its own type of way. I liked it. Good job and good luck on the contest!
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Wow! Betrayal, it seems, is always the center of so many relationships ending...so why bother trying to make amends when the person is never going to have your trust? Well done.
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I love it.
It's very different than the other entries, in a great way.
It packs the punch, and tells a whole story, in just twenty words. Just what my contest asks for.
You worded it perfectly, and I just think you did wonderfully!
Thank you so much for taking the time for my contest, and I wish you the absolute best of luck!
xoxo
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Tay
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