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Author notes

I'm a girl. Obviously.

This, just to clarify, is just a contest entry. It isn't true. (Though I sometimes wish it was! =P )

A contest entry

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  • Prim-Rose
    August 20

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    That was so cute! Loved how you combined the last two words - gave it a unique touch.


  • intoothandclaw
    August 13
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    But... that's three words.


    • Black Dragon15
      August 13
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      Normally, it would be, but I combined the last two words. Makes it more unique. And I thought it would add a nice emotional touch to it.


  • Snuggle-Bunny
    August 13
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    Aw, that was cute! I loved it, good job!


  • Hatsune Miku
    August 13
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    aww... you're in love....


  • Lady Editor gold member
    August 12
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    Cute. I really think this was rather a gutsy, though unique move. Good job.

  • In love is two words, so this is three words, if you want to get down to it.
    But I like the way that you combined them to make them two words. "In love" being one word, one thing, inseparable... gives it a different emotional look.


  • Radiance
    August 11

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    Lovely job. It's amazing, the emotions so few words can stir within a person. Excellent choice of words.

    Good luck in the contest!


  • Taylor Renee
    August 11

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    Oh.

    Your author's notes make me want to cry!


    Anyway.
    This is absolutely beautiful, just as I would expect from you.
    Perfect.
    Should've known you'd be the first, and most beautiful, entry.

    But I'm still offended, so I'm going to make this comment short.

    Absolutely gorgeous, of course.
    Thank you for entering, blah blah blah all that stuff I always end contest entry comments with.

    xoxo
    -♥-
    Tay


    • Black Dragon15
      August 11
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      Why? You know I meant it wasn't true romance-wise, not friendship-wise, right?

      Thank you, mon ange. I'm glad you liked it. But really, your contests inspire me. So you're to blame.

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