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Author notes
I hope you liked it! At least a little ^^
My current favorite song would probably be...
Hawthorne Heights, Screenwriting An Apology. :]
A contest entry
- Shake It. by asthray.heart.
1050 points, ended September 18, 2008, 72 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
How bad did it suck? Scale of one to ten xD
Comments
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I did like it, It was deep and sad, yet somehow, ironically, hopeful, lol. Great job, keep up the good work =DD
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Hahaha hawthorne heights hehe, kinda emo sappy music you like there
Rather odd how you placed this like half way down the page. the numbers were like a weird lil countdown to the words you chose which I've forgotten. *looks again and stabs sidetracking starburst*
We all gotta chase something in life right?
Great words.
Thnks for entering and goodluck,
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Yeah, haha. It is. I love like, every type of music, I'm a weirdo ^^
Thanks a lot.
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On a scale of one to ten... zero (and it's not only because I don't know how to count).
I really like the fact that you put those words on a line somewhere between 1 and 49 (I think they were on line 22). This really suggests a fall and you have to chase the empty lines to get to the words. That was BRILLIANT!
Good luck in the contest!
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Thank you! So much!
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This is one of the best that I've read in this contest. I really like the image of chasing something that's fallen, but something immaterial? Interesting. Unique. Well done.
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I take that as an enormous compliment, and I thank you so much!
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As always, I love it. How could I not? Those three words have such meaning, such depth...
Beautiful, ma chere. Absolutely and utterly beautiful.
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Thank you. So much, ma petite. Your comment means so, so much.
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You are, as always ma belle, most welcome.
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Perfect entry, as usual Taylor! Whenever there's a contest where the entry can only be a certain amount of words, I always look for yours, because I know it'll be the best.
And it is, of course.
Peace and love,
♥xo Sarah
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Thank you!
And ahwww! That was so sweet! But even if it were, it isn't the best now!
Thank you, Sari. You're the best!
Always,
xoxo-♥-Tay
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WOW! As usual you fail to disappoint me
I love your stuff ^^ Good luck!
~*Princess*~
beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.
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HAHA! I read that and thought you said
"As usual, you fail, and disappoint me" xD
Thank you so much! ^^
xoxo
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Tay
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