They ran. With all the speed they could muster, they ran as far and as fast as possible from their prison. Hand in hand, one guiding the other, they smiled. They were free.
Author notes
This is probably the shortest story I've ever written.
Feel free to interpret it in any way you like, for it has many layers.
Please tell me what you think
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It sounds like to people could finally be together. Anyway it was still really well written and I did enjoyed in for just a few seconds
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That was really short but really good! I liked it! Theres so many options as to what had happened. It makes me wonder....Well great job!
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I liked the way that this story gave you multiple ways to view this. They could be running from an actual prision or it could be a metaphor for something else. I love it, awesome job!
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I can relate to this on at least a couple of levels. Heh.
For some reason, when I read this, I get the image of you and Tay running away together...lol.
(dunno if you were thinking that, or something completely different! But it keeps playing in my head...you guys running over flowery hills in the sunset or something...toward freedom to live your lives how you want.)
Hmmmm.... so many different scenarios could be written from these starting lines really. You say a lot, in very few words. It evokes images that's for sure.
Nice job Naila!
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I figured you might.
That honestly never crossed my mind. But hey, I did say to interpret it in any way you liked. 
Thanks Michelle. Really means a lot to me.
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Indeed it does.
And I love that about it.
As short as it is, it speaks volumes. Perfect.
It's wording is perfect, as always, Nailie.
I just love this. Beautiful. Great work on it, ma petite!
xoxo
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Tay
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Thanks, Taylor. I'm glad you love it.
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Whoa.
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I have no clue why, but I love this. O__O It does have layers, and can be adopted into anything. XD
-HT
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I have even less of a clue where it came from. XD. Just popped into my head really.
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I liked it and my mind is now flooded with all the ways I could interpret this. Even though it has so few words, it gets its point across. You wrote it well - good job.
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Thank you. T'was my aim to get it's point across with as few words as possible, so I'm glad it worked.
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