The people who run the Wal-mart stores are trying to make their employees vote for McCain.1
That is wrong and it may even be illegal, what does Wal-mart have to gain?2
Wal-mart has no right to choose who their employees vote for.3
The employees should stand up and not take this crap anymore.4
If these people want to vote for McCain, that's fine but they shouldn't be forced to do it.5
Wal-mart was once a great establishment but this time they really blew it.6
This may be Wal-mart's biggest blunder.7
If they're not careful, they may go under.
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Um, you tried waaaay too hard to rhyme. Im sorry, but you totally did.
Its very, choppy. Its doesnt really have rhtyme or anything (I dont know how you spell it). It needs to be longer, or shorter.
I honestly, dont like it. No offence. I hope you continue working on this peice.
VH
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