The Return of the Vampire's

Chapter 11

The whispered sky was awakened very abruptly, by a long petrifying scream, the scream filled the air like a lions roar, then it was an almost deafening eerie silence.2

It was a humid tedious day in the cemetery, everybody was silent and they all seemed to be in the dark, however these were no ordinary people, they were creatures of the night, and they were after their queen ‘Relinqa’.3

They had been searching for thousands of years and finally the Vampirian Empire could rule once more, and the creatures of the light would cease to exist.4

It was the sixth school that James had been to. He was such an annoyance to the schools that he was kicked out. He may have been a bad tempered disparaging 14 year old he was actually a very indulgent young man. His Best friend always thought he was like that because of stress and bullying.5

James Mother had a good feeling about the school; James was to see a helper to help him with his work and social areas. He would try o help him calm down and not to be so self-protective.6

“Welcome to the Land of the Whites, Relinqa”7

She took out her half putrefied hand out of the half putrefied glove and stabbed the vampirian slave. Then she carefully extracted his heart and then she ate it.  Then she said in a very violent tone of voice              “where am I” Then and old wise Vampire who had been a loyal servant to the vampirian queen said very gently, 8

“You are in the land of The Dark, My Queen”. 9

With this she smiled and then suddenly her face grew skin.10

James woke up letting out a deafening scream, his mum celosia came rushing in like a bullet.11

“What’s the matter James” she said sounding very worried.12

“I had a ruthless nightmare; I dreamt that a vampire queen was brought back to life.”13

Don’t Worry” Said celosia very contentedly “it was only a Dream.”14

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  • Reb153
    August 12, 2005
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    great work

    Very good job. you should make more to this story like a series. I got shivers up my spine. You have a talent in writing stories. Keep up the great work.
    ~becca~