S.U.D.a.

I guess you are all wondering what S.U.D.A. means, right? That will come a bit later in our story. Right now this is a story of a little puppy named Opal. A small Corgi was sitting in her small room in the petshop wondering if she would like an adventurous life or a life with a happy family. She couldn't decide. All she wanted now was to get out of the petshop. Her luck was upon her when she was taken home by two sisters, Ana and Grace. The two sisters decided to name this Corgi, Opal, after a long dispute over names like Twinkie, Godiva, Kiki, and Graciana. They named this little Corgi Opal because it was Ana's birthstone. Opal was the perfect name because if at night you see Opal and you shine light near her, her eyes change different colors. One night you could see green eyes glowing or purple eyes glowing they change different colors each time. But the sisters did not know this. Well now, a few weeks later, Opal was waiting for her 2 favorite owners to come home from school when she heard this slight and airy noise. It was coming from the side gate leading into the backyard. Opal went to check it out. SHe saw a black labrador digging throught the solid concrete making a tunnel to the other side. This labrador dug fast because in a few seconds other dogs were in the backyard by transportation through the tunnel. Once all the dogs were in, the labrador and this big giant black hairy dog covered the tunnel with a trashcan. THere were total a labrador, a giant black hairy dog, 3 bulldogs, a chihauhau, and 2 golden retrievers. Opal was bewildered. SHe asked shyly," Who are you?" The labrador answered,"My name is Rondo and this here is Bulldozer." He was pointiong to the giant black hair dog. The chihauhau suddenly piped up," My name is Chippy and I love chips. They're so crunchy and when you here the crunch it makes the light now which makes you feel it so good. Oh and over there are the Triplets, Skipper, Ripper, and Tripper." "Hi we are the triplets. We're here to try to make your life much better," the triplets said. One golden retriever said," My name is Amber and this is my sister Golden Flower." Opal politely greeted everyone and then asked," Why are you here in my backyard." Rondo answered,"Well, it seems that you landed in the top agents of S.U.D.A.'s neighborhood."1

"What is S.U.D.A.?"2

"It stands for Secret Undercover Dog Agency."3

"Wow."4

"Well since you dropped in you could either leave or become one of us with passing the test."5

"If I have to pass a hard test, count me out."6

"Well, then I guess you have to pack your baggies, kiddio," Bulldozer suddenly said.7

" I never said I didn't want to leave. And anyways you said top agents."8

Bulldozer suddenly piped up again," Yup that's us. We are the top agents. Rondo is sort of like our leaderio and he could dig through any surfaceio and is a pretty good jumperio. The triplets here are masters at disguiseios. And Chippy hereio could make himself fit in anything even a crackio. And Golden Flower and Amber are the ones who attract the enemios with their great lookios and finish them up. I mean you know, turn them inio. And of course myself."9

"Don't over do it, Bulldozer," Rondo said.10

"As I was saying, myself of course could cross the treacherous terrainios, swim through the cast oceanios, fly in the light fluffy cloudios."11

Opal thought," I bet his favorite cookies are Oreos."12

"And with all that workoutios, I love to take a break with my favorite snackio, carob-safe Oreos."13

Rondo whispered to Opal that Bulldozer loved to add an 'io' after most things. "Well then, now Bulldozer is done talking. We are going to give little Opal here the test. We are all going to tackle you. And you know we are all the top agents. So as I said this is going to be a hard test. Ready set go!" At that moment everybody pounced on little Opal. But at the last second, Opal stepped 2 paws out of the way and the dogs collided into each other. Opal asked quietly," Are all of you alright?" Rondo answered," Yeah, all of us are alright, but how did you do that? You outsmarted the top agents of the S.U.D.A. I'm impressed." He then announced that Opal passed the test. Everbody was cheering. "Now we should get out of here. Let's move out to my place." Everybody followed Rondo out of the backyard. Once they were at the front gate, the four bigger dogs jumped over the iron spiked gate gracefully, and Chippy easily slipped through the iron bars. Opal didn't know what to do. She followed Chippy's lead, and she went throught the small gap through the bars. The Triplets though were having a hard time. The only good for which they were was the good for disguises, that's all. So all of them stood on top of each other and so Skipper was unfortunately at the bottom followed by Ripper and then Tripper at the top. Tripper hung onto the top of the bars and swung himself over with Ripper hung onto him. So when they were done there were 2 bulldogs outside and 1 still inside the front yard. When Skipper noticed this, he said," YOu guys come back here on this side. You weren't suppose to leave me behind. Come back here this instant." So Rondo jumped over and picked up Skipper and jumped over to the other side. After that, all of them followed Rondo to his backyard and he told Opal," When you are an official member of S.U.D.A., you will have your own communication with the S.U.D.A. base." Rondo went to a certain purple leaf and pressed it. Suddenly all the vines on the walls made a shape of a rectangle. Then a leaf that seemed to be acting like a speaker asked," Password please."14

" Leafvine"15

"Password accepted."16

Suddenly a face appeared on the screen, it was an Irish Settler. She said," Base to Rondo. Speaking."17

Rondo said," We got her. Send us to the base." 18

Then the screen turned off. And all of them were being sucked into the ground. OPal never experienced that and she was thoroughly scared. What was she going to do?

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  • flaming-fox
    August 10, 2008
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    wow. :D *applause*

    wow, ana, this is REALLY good!
    except, there are a few punctuation/grammar mistakes i see... would u like to collaborate stories? that's where u go under ur story and click "edit" and then type 'flaming-fox' in the collaborators' area, so i can help u edit ur story.
    plus, the 1st and 14th paragraphs r a bit long... don't ya think?
    ttfn!

    ~Sarah
    http://flaming-fox.webs.com