Love encased in a fragile heart
Insight of the true person
Arises the fire that can't be put out
Ripped apart by a selfish thought
In a list
Please tell me what you think...
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Interesting acrostic. I like it. A nicely written sad poem with an overall "broken heart' feel. Good work, Keli.
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Wow, for just one stanza that really good.
I totally want to see more added onto this, if you are planning to. It was just short of amazing
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Nevrmd, anyways, looking forward to reading more of your work. -
I like it; the word choice is good and it's short yet effective. This is a great acrostic piece.
Deep meaning and impactful, full of emotion. Keep writing!
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Interesting
A sad lost love poem based on the word liar. Its short but good and makes a lot of sense.
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