First section: Character Profile 1
1. Damon2
2. Summons (When needed) 3
3. Looks to be 16-174
4. Male5
5. Demon/angel cross6
6. His appearance changes thought the story, but he's always slender, well built, pale, and tends to wear black. He has a piercing in his left ear, right eyebrow, and a snake bite in his lip. His hair is cut in a jagged not too long length that tends to fall into his face. Also he has wings he can call forth at will. 7
7. Damon's father is the Demon Lord of Hell and his Mother was the angel of death, now a fallen for her affair with the demon 8
8. His love interest is Naomi Breaker (He just refuses to see it)9
9. He dislikes being told what to do, not having his direction followed, and when people probe into his life. He likes… he shows a subtle like for Naomi, but really there isn't much he does like. 10
10: Being half angel he has a soul and therefore a good understanding of right and wrong. He might not always go about it the right way but he tries to do the right thing. 11
11. He's closed off and likes to threaten the lives of those close to him in fear of letting them get to close. 12
12. He aims to help Naomi as quickly as possible because she is the one that summoned him in the first place. 13
13. He continuously conflicts with him self over not knowing exactly who he is or what he's meant to do.14
14. He doesn't have a calling exactly, he's a demon so when he's summoned he's expected to get the task done. 15
15. His story takes place in two installments of the same thing. The first Dealings With Demons the second Fighting Shadows. Fighting shadows is meant to be directly attached to Dealings With Demons as I was loving the story and unhappy with it's length, so to keep it going I created Fighting Shadows is a direct branch off of the same story with a different title. To clear up the appearance thing a little more; at the beginning he had steel grey eyes and bleach blond hair. Later on in the story his eyes turn to a clear blue and his hair turns black. 16
Second section: A sample scene17
He used the darkness as cover for his return. The light avoiding him as if he himself were too one of the shadows he now hid among. His eyes searched fervently for the girl, she had to be here he'd seen her taken. As always with his appearance the lights in the room flickered. "It took you long enough." She hissed. 18
"I had other things to do." He growled impatiently, the female cop interrogating the girl jumped back in fright. "I can't leave you alone for five minuets without you finding some trouble." He stepped into the light and was delighted to see the look of terror on the woman's face when she found she hadn't brought her gun with her. 19
"Who are you?" She demanded. 20
"It's me Damon." He knew they thought he'd kidnapped the girl and that's what made it so much fun to see her face pale like it did. 21
"Did you come here to rescue me or terrorize people?" Naomi scolded. A frown twitched his mouth downwards, the girl could be so bold sometimes. 22
He smirked again, "Both." 23
*I just want to explain the scene. I originally have it all written in first person from Naomi's point of view. I took this from the story and rewrote it in third person from Damon's. I hope that's okay.*24
Third Section: A link to your story 25
This is my fiction press link as I have nearly all of it posted there and hardly any posted on story write. 26
http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2511734/1/Dealings_With_Demons
*The story*27
http://www.fictionpress.com/u/609673/
*My homepage*28
Author notes
Character profile contest entry
In a list
A contest entry
- Character profiles by Intrepid.
550 points, ended September 30, 30 entries
Honorable winner
• next story in this contest, remove from contest - Novels - Your Character by tallblondie.
900 points, ended September 20, 30 entries
Honorable winner
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
-
Thank you for entering the contest 'Novels - Your Character' - I hope the contest has helped you understand your character better.

Interesting character - Damon is an angel/demon hybrid - his name alone makes me think that it reflects this. The concept of the hybrid makes this character somewhat unique - he has the morals of an angel - but he is expected to be controlled like a demon - summoned to complete tasks. This internal conflict and how he relates to other characters could have the potential to be rather entertaining. -
I love..lurrrvvve..stories on the line of demons and romance- hated romance in some ways. Forgive me if I am wrong. You put a lot of effort into this profile and although not for my contest I for think it suited the specific needs I needed.
What ispired this story or what was the idea for it intially? and has it been the same all the way through or as you have been writing it has the intial concept changed some?
Answer via Im please
Good luck
thanks for enterng the contest
and good luck with both contest.
Blair
-
DAMON!
I loved DAmon!! there i go, spelling names with the first two letters capitalized again. Well I'm not fixing it. Anyways, as i was saying,.....
I love Damon!! he's a great charater, very well put together. He's dark in all the right places, and it makes him very interesting. I never got to finish fighting shadows, and when you gave it to me, you skipped a chapter, lol, you have to post it, so I cn get caught up, lol.
Anyways, really good discription of Damon, it puts his character in perspective (i think I spelt that right??). Good luck in the contests even though you're competing against me in both of them, lol, I hope we place =DDD



