Serenity Valley (a fan-fiction of firefly)

Zoe was on the ground."Captain Zoe, report!"a voice yelled.She sat up,her eyes wide with horror."Kael and Jensen were killed in the first cross-fire,Gaemel,Byushan,and Futer in the second.Lohim went down last night during watch.Washburn was captured."she said to the voice,whom she knew to be Sergeant Malcolm Reynolds."Charles,or Hoban?"Malcolm shouted as the troops started to wake up and make noises."Who's Hoban Washburn?"Zoe replied after the troops had taken their stations."I-I-don't know.It just popped into my head."Mal stammered.A sudden white light filled the space, and...Zoe woke up. That was during the war.A dream about the war was unusual.That moment didn't even happen. Oh well,she was married to Wash now.She turned over to look at his face.He hadn't even woken up yet.Well,that meant time to get up so he gets up, and dragging him up to the cockpit with some breakfast and having to deal with the captain and Jayne, and River in the morning, none of whom were very pleasant in the morning and River almost never was.Or,she could go back to sleep and not have to deal with any gorram thing.That sounded good to her.

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  • Purplesparrow
    October 27

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    nice one

    A.
    i really like this one.. Keep writtin. I'm a firefly fan thanks to u
    you suck
    Just kinding it's pretty cool


  • Glowstarcharmer
    August 7

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    Hey ya! Yeah, I am a fan of 'Firefly'. My housemates introduced me to it last year and I loved it! I had previously watched the film 'Serenity' with some other mates but it didnt make all that much sense to me since I hadnt seen firefly. I should probably watch it again now that I have seen the series and see if it makes more sense to me.

    My favourite charater is probably Jayne, although he isnt my usual type of character. I love his style of humour he brings to it though. I also really like Kaylee, although my boyfriend really has the hots for her (he has a thing for female mechanics, dont ask!).

    Anyway, good story. Is there gonna be more? I would like to read it if there is.

    X Amber X


  • oceanlove
    August 6
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    Yaay!


    • idancer
      August 15
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      Firefly is awesome! I am about to read the next one but I have one suggustion... The part seems a little short.

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