Falling (song, not that great, but it was worth a shot)

(Dots after a word are to show that the note is held out)1

(descently fast tempo) 2

*chorus*
I get the feeling like I'm falling from the celing,3

And i'm not falling, no where....4

I get it stonger as we stay together longer,5

And I fear...Its not going away....
*end Chorus*6

I've got the love of my life,7

I've got all I can ask for,8

Yet I am just standing her,9

Holding on.....10

Ive got the best boy ever,11

Holding onto me tight,12

But I never know,13

What will happend after tonight.14

I hold my head up high,15

And I wonder why........16

*chorus* I get the feeling like im falling from the ceeling,17

And im not falling, no where,18

I get it stronger as we stay together longer,19

And i fear...its not going away.
*end chorus*20

You tuck me in at night so sweetly and so cozy making sure that im not cold or uncomfortable...21

You hold my head up as you kiss me softly gently with your itching lips...22

You hug me closely as you whisper in my ear everything that i want to be said to me....23

You say so gently so calmly so ready that you love me...24

And you always will....25

But until the day,26

That you take me away,27

Ill sit here patiently,28

Waiting on you....29

Waiting on you........30

To take me away...31

And ill never understand..32

Why I get this feeling,33

Every night...34

*chorus*
I get the feeling like im falling from the celing,35

And im not falling, no where...36

I get it stronger as we stay to gether longer,37

And i fear....Its not going away...
*end Chorus*38

No this feeling that I feel,39

Is way to surreal,40

And I can barely deal..41

With the way......42

That I feel...for you...43

And if nothing happens how it should,44

I just want you to know that I tried,45

And I love you like no other girl can love a boy,46

And ill miss you for eternity,47

Ill miss the way you treated me...48

And I really dont know why.....49

(Chorus..quieter and slower) I get the feeling like im falling from the celing,50

And im not falling.....(louder) no im not falling.....51

I get it stonger, stronger, stronger....As we stay together, longer and longer......52

(louder and faster) 53

I get the feeling like im falling from the celing,54

And im not falling no where,55

I get it stronger as we stay together longer,56

And i fear.....(slows down) oh i fear....57

(slower) Its not going.....no...where.....

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  • ChristieLove
    August 23

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    Very, very cute. The way it is writen, it brings him up as almost a superhero, saving you from everything, and just making you fall deeper. And falling very fast. I kind of interpret "falling from the ceiling" the feeling that you are just falling in love so fast you cannot stop.

  • poium poaupoiujj
    February 26

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    This was very adorable....I think most of us girls feel that in relationships...Like the guy is the only thing holding us from falling on our asses, and the comfort of knowing that if we were to trip and fall, they would catch us just in time. ^^

  • Non Paix
    February 22
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    Awww!! This was cute. And a very good song Great way to express your emotions towards Raphaël-Apollinaire, lol (yea, I typed his whole name much like Amel did, but in a better, cooler way) haha!! Keep up the great work!!!


  • J-Dus
    February 1

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    Beautiful Great song...You are so cute!! lol. This was amazing! It was so good!! hehe....And to Raf? Most likely, lol. you guys are too cute!

  • terminal
    January 5

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    It was a fine song....and very cute...I assume this was dedicated to Raphaël-Apollinaire? (Yes, I wrote his whole name to try and expand the comment, it worked well, wouldn't you say?) hahaha...Great write


  • Dassy
    September 5, 2008
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    sorri i forgot applause!

  • Dassy
    September 5, 2008

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    if u made the song or sold it to someone or something I would totallly buy it. I liked it alot, and it would definately be one of the most played songs on my mp3... even if u were the worst singer in the world! ;p jkjk


  • Upoiuoisjcokmi
    August 5, 2008

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    Very good beautiful I loved it. I love you!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    With all the love in the world
    Raphaël


  • Lady Eventide Greeters member
    August 5, 2008

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    I love the line 'I get the feeling like im falling from the celing'. There's just something about it. I think you did a tremendously fabulous job. I can imagine this playing in my head.

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