La laaa The stacey story Part 1

"La laa,The wind has come,1

and the night has fallen,2

the pixies come out to play"3

Sang A young girl named Stacey.4

The forest floor cracked and snapped under her,but that was not all that was heard.5

They stalked her quietly humming along "La laa" Theyre movements soundless except for the occasonal flutter.They mutter about the girl and quietly follow her every move.They silently agreed that they must have her so she could sing for them.6

When the girl stopped for a rest they made their move. They sprinkled sleeping dust and magic over Stacey.She soon felt the affects a she felt the urge for her eyelids to close, and soon was asleep, but just before she did she saw several winged delicate wing human like creatures looking over her."Pix" was all she managed to say.7

The pixies worked endlessly trying to create a potion to make her one of them , but this was one of their specalties and didnt take to long just as the sleeping dust was wearing off they slipped a small amount into her mouth.8

Her body twisted and shrank she cried out in anguish.Tears rolled down her face.The pixies watched not in horror ,but praise their
finest work they thought.9

Soon they pain ended for the girl she finally stopped shaking ,but she was no longer a girl ,but a pixie. "Whaaat whaat am I" Stacey said in a higher voice. 10

"You are one of us" a younger one replied.11

"Sing"They began to say repeatedly12

"ookay" not far from crying said Stacey13

"Where the wind blows 14

The pixies fly" Sang Stacey in a horribly high voice15

"Stop" The pixies screeched!16

End of part 117

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  • Paws
    August 5

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    Wow, you certainly build a different half of me XD
    YAY now you put me in your type of story, I will evilly put you in one of mine
    And it won't be purty
    Saving my points, but this'll help.


    • Lorien
      August 5
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      tehee i thinkyour more evil than a lot thingshmmm maybe ill makeyou in to a vamire


  • NooNiThEWitcH
    August 5

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    Interesting, I can't wait to read what would happen next.
    Pixies usually squeal and have those voices like creaking doors and stuff ( i just remember them from the second Harry Potter movie lol).

    I like it, you just need to adjust your lining like here:
    "but just before she did she saw several winged delicate wing 8

    human like creatures looking over her."9

    it should be:
    "but just before she did she saw several winged delicate wing human like creatures looking over her."8

    Keep on writing, and let me know when part 2 comes in.

    Nooni