"Damn, I'm gonna be late for cram school.." I thought as I trod faster, stepping in a puddle and splashing my jeans. I looked ahead of me, and saw that one of the street light was flickering on and off. I stood on the sidewalk in front of it, staring at the street below. It flashed on, and suddenly there was a beautiful girl standing in the street.2
She was tall, and red and black stockings on. She had stunning red hair, and a Gothic looking outfit. She looked at me, frowning. She looked very sad. Then I noticed amazing black wings coming from her back. She looked as gorgeous as an angel accept for her black wings. The light flicked off, and when it came back on, the girl was gone.I stared at that spot a moment longer, but didn't see her. With one last glance I ran off to cram school.3
At class, I stared out the window, wondering, hoping that I would see the girl with the black wings one more time. To be graced by her beauty once more. Suddenly, I heard the teacher call my name,4
"Anthony!!" He yelled, "Please read where I left off!" I stood up, flipping through the book we were reading and found the paragraph. I took a deep breath and read aloud:5
"I don't wan the world to see me, Because I don't think that they'd understand..."6
"When everything's meant to be broken...I just want you to know who i am." The girl sat on the roof of the school outside the classroom, hanging her feet over the edge. She had sang the words to the song as Anthony read them, and she looked up at the moon. "He thought I was beautiful..." She said to herself, "Just because my wings were black instead of white, everyone hated me." As she stared at the moon, she smiled slightly, "Someday everyone will see that I'm just like the other angels. I'm beautiful in my own way."7
She stood up and spread her wings, and with one last look at the school, she flew off.8
I walked home slowly, staring as I passed the spot under the street light where I had seen the girl. "I'm Home!!" I yelled, going upstairs and throwing my backpack on the ground. I went over to my bed, and noticed a single black feather resting on my pillow. The door to my room had been locked, and so had the window, but someone had gotten in. There was a note tied to the feather with a small red ribbon. I picked it up and read it:9
"Anthony...you thought I was beautiful, even though i'm so different. Thank you. Signed...your guardian angel." I looked over the note, and looked out my window. I smiled to myself, because as I looked at the moon, I saw the dark shadow of a girl, with black wings.
Author notes
I love the song that inspired this person to draw their picture. And their picture inspired me: http://skategirl.deviantart.com/art/City-of-angels-93517359
http://storywrite.com/story/191638
Above is a link to the next story, but it was on my other profile... 
So, if you like this one, please read my other one.
A contest entry
- Picture Inspired- Pictures for ALL! XD by Friesian.
275 points, ended August 15, 2008, 5 entries
Honorable winner
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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I personally think that this was a pretty good story...
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lololololololol
YAY FOR ME~~
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Equally enjoyable as the other one i read by you. Very great work. Again, thanks for sharing and providing the link so i could check this out Rian.
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Thanx. I wrote a series about her.
1. An Angel with Black Wings
2. Sooner or Later
3. An Equal Distance
4. Death of an Angel
5. Death Kiss (this is from a different POV, but is the same story as Sooner or Later)
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Aww!
This was so beautiful and amazing. I LOVE the end! I was so surprised at the end, and really happy. Great idea! Excellent job!
-Lissy



