Glorious Dream, Horrible Nightmare

He holds my heart in his hand. Dont know what id do without him. my only true love.  We walk on the beach and hold hands tightly.  Kissing Passionately under the moon and starlit night.  He whispers, "I love you." I look at him love struck.1

He drives me home and im on top of the world. he walks me to the door and he kisses me again. I walk in and go to bed.  I wake up and watch the news while pouring me some coffee. a Newscaster announces, "A teen-age boy dies of drug overdose, more details in a couple of short minutes." I scream and drop my class and coffee goes everywhere. It's my one and only love on that dusty television screen.2

I scream and cry very loudly. Then i wake up in a cold sweat.3

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i dont know, just thought of it one night, basicly i dreamed about it. hope you enjoy.

Jessica

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  • March 3, 2005
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    that is so true it actually happens in real life it is sad

  • sweet sarah
    February 26, 2005
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    thats sad.


  • XxGuns N RosesxX
    February 26, 2005
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    this makes me feel happy and sad at the same time...weird...
    anyways this is a good poem i liked reading it...keep up the good work!

    Ellen


  • February 26, 2005
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    i had a similar dream... the girl i love had killed herself. i woke up crying...


  • February 26, 2005
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    this is awsome!! i bet that wasnt one of the nicest dreams you had lol ... great write anyways

    *iva*


  • dontdropanchor
    February 24, 2005
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    i really like this one...it is sad and then at the end it is kind of a relief that it was a dream...very well done!!!

  • jlarson
    February 24, 2005
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    i did enjoy this, it made me smile, then it made me sad, and then it made me think wow, what if that happend to someone i love. and then you give the ending. ha, nice job!


  • lightwithinyourdark
    February 24, 2005
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    that is so sad and to moving. i know alot of people who are into drugs, and i often find myself worrying about their well being. i liked this alot, i think alot of people could relate. anywho, awesome write, so keep writing, and have anice day!!!

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