Relentless Shadows - Chapter 2

Sorry to disappoint you. Relentless Shadows has been temporarily removed by tallblondie. She has divorced herself from the project and removed what I'd posted without my permission. I guess I won't take legal action.1

However, I do feel it is a good story with a good overall plot. I will be rewriting, reposting, and continuing the story as I have time. There will be significant changes to the original idea, but I think you'll enjoy it when I begin posting.2

Andy

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  • bowmore bill
    August 3, 2008

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    facinated

    Hi Andy, written to your usual proficient standard.
    Wow, if she was human, she is one scary woman.
    Hope you have something particuarly horrid waiting for her.

    beginning: 5, language: 2, plot: 3, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.


    • Andy Stephenson gold member
      August 3, 2008
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      Yes,

      She is a very scary woman. She doesn't mind inflicting a little pain. In fact, she enjoys doing that. Chapter one opens quite differently, but you've already read the surprise in chapter two. Chapter three should be even more interesting.

      Thanks for reading, commenting, and applauding.

      Andy


  • Reaver Greeters member
    August 2, 2008

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    I really liked how this one started, made it exciting Another Cold-heart....love it! I could really feel her menace in the way she was making him read from the cards, i loved that, that was very creative I got a feeling Walkers going to find himself a sidekick

    • Andy Stephenson gold member
      August 2, 2008
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      Thanks

      I'm glad that you like dark vicious killers. This chick is cold and cruel. You find out more about both of them as the story moves on.

      If you find yourself wanting to do some extra reading, here is a link to a serial killer of a different sort:

      http://storywrite.com/list/34946-Secret-Radio-Murders

      Thanks for reading and commenting. It is really appreciated.

      Andy