Feelings and mingled bodies left on the floor. The stench unbarable, mixed with the horrid black smoke. It's like a dream, I run my eyes and cough from the stench. Not a dream! Real life, a tear drips silently down my dark and dirty face. Seeing these terrible images. I see you standing there, I yell your name out as you turn around......BANG!!!! your dead. Just like that dead. I shall not shed a single tear. For if you cry you die.1
I will forever-more miss you my dearest, "WHY GOD? WHY!" their walking towards me, "what should I do?" Im going to die. I feel it. "God please forgive me for my sins and welcome me into you glorious heaven Please, in your presious name i pray, AMEN". BANG! Now I shall cry, for you for others just like me and for myself as well. "I see you, Im coming."2
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Dedicated to all those who should'nt have had to perish in that horrifying time. Thanks for reading and commenting. 
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Jessica
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Aww thats sad. This is really good, knowing that The Holocaust really happend, & well this is just really nice, lol. Keep it up
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nice job on the poem i cant wait to read more of urs
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wow awesome this is great
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Geat write..I wrote one like this awhile back for another site.Mine was on a little girl who arrives at a Concentration camp..Yours was a very well written piece..I liked it.Keep this up..
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wow, this is awesome. you catch the pain and horror that went through almost all of those people who didn't deserve. great job! jess
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Awsome Write!
I loved this write...Please accept this as a response and an honor to your work today...
I stood with you in the cold...frozen mud and stench of death..choking praying huddled down until I heard the fatal sound..then fear and peace as my soul left me..crying forever, until they set you free...I see you and joy fills my soul..eternal lovers now...no longer half...but whole!
RIP ♥
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this is a wonderful tribute to those who died cruel deaths. i think everyone needs to know about this time and its horrors. i know last year one of my classmates made a horrible joke about the holocaust, and then parents complained, therefore we watched a video on it. it was so upsetting and disturbing, but people need to know so they don't just joke about it cause it was one of the worst times in history. anywho, awesome write, so keep writing, and have anice day!!!!
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this is excellent, breath taking. a worthy memorial. great job.
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excellent
I really like this work...you commented on mine and i wanted to read some of yours...this is the first one i have read and i REALLY like it!!! It is full of bold feelings and it is very well written.
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