Driftpaw awoke to find him self burried under rotting weeds and soil. He was in a ditch. And a big one from the looks of it. Painfuly he picked himself up shoving the dirt and weeds from his back. "Moan." He could not climb up that!23
And the sevire pain in his head was dulling his senseces. Carefully juging the jump Driftpaw leaped, But it was not far enough and he smacked into the side of the ditch and slid back down to the bottom. This could take awhile. Driftpaw thought of Peachpaw back at camp and how worried she would be about him.45
Back at camp Peachpaw was stuffing her face with mice and could care none the less....
Like she really cared. The selfish cat was hogging all the glory exagerating a little to much on how she attcked the Darkclan deputy sending him home screaming for mercy. 
Figures.67At the thought of Peachpaw Driftpaw found new strength and leaped to the top of the ditch out of breath but fully there. As the pain in his head grew more severe Driftpaw lost his better jugement and randomly picked a direction to travel back home. Coincidentaly he was wrong and wandered into the disstace confused and in pain.8
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