Return To Sunshine

Teetering upon the razors edge
Of insanity,
You alone know how
To kick me when I’m this
low.1

Fall
From the stars
To a pit in the ground
Where I am alone
With feelings
Buried.2

Buried in earth,
As thoughts
Come to play with the crickets.3

With nails against the slate
That keeps me here,
I claw at earth
To break the surface,
To return to sunshine.4

Sunbeams
Hit my skin.
Burns
In the most delightful way,
As you kiss away the scars
Without seeing them.

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Im trying out a new writing style. What do you think?

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