This is a story based on Zuko's mom with a lot of Zuko scenes and some Kataang and Zutara this is based on the story of the air nomads also.1
last time on Avatar2
"Were is my mother"Zuko replied3
"The Avatr could have killed then and there"Zuko replied4
"Last time Sozin's comet came Firelord Sozin used it to kill the air nomads"Ozai replied5
Katara was busy washing her hair as Zuko and AAng trainnied. Soka and Suki were still asleep. Zuko's mom came out with some hot cookies. Then as Zuko attaked AAng with Firebending AAng acually6
firebended at Zuko but the firebendding went out of control and hit Zuko's mother and she fell with blood comming out of her mouth. Zuko and Soka went over there but they saw blood comming from her hair. She was dead. "Why you have to throw a fire ball at her WHY why could have you just got out the way then do what you kids do HUH!!!" Zuko walked away stumpping. He sat on Appa. 7
That night they had a funneral for Zuko's mom that was held in a tinny shrine. But Katara went to see Zuko. Zuko layed on Appa in front of the shrine. Katara came up and peeked then saw Zuko doing firebending. Katara sat with Zuko right near him. Then Zuko replied "It is a nice night." Katara replied "Yea you know when your mother died it wasn't completly AAng's fought. He did it by mistake and you know AAng will be sorry and please accept his appologie. " Zuko replied softly "I know Katara but you know me I have a temper that can't be controled." All of a sudden Zuko kissed Katara and Katara gave in and it was passionite and strong.8
They each let go breathing very hard. "This NEVER happened!!"They each replied and moved in oppisite directions. Then Zuko replied "Oh yea and tell AAng that I have appoligized and am sorry then stormed out. 9
Soka ran up to Katara then yelled AAng is missing. Katara left Zuko behind to find AAng. 10
Meanwhile up in the mountains were Sora and AAng. They talked. 11
"Listen I know were diffrent but we are both Air Nomads.AAng replied camly " Shut up!! Father has gotten to you I don't care we are diffrent and I am stronger. You are weak and you are usless. It was your peoples' faught I am unbeatable and you are weak!" Sora yelled. Sora began to fight.12
The bandages got bigger as Sora had his right in his face in a fist. Then he threw his hand with the right bandages and the bandages came off his hand and attacked AAng's left hand. Then threw him off the 300 degree mountain were his skin was burnning from the heated rocks but he was saved by a mystrious woman. She had a firenation crown like Zuko's in the shape of a flame and looked a lot like Zuko with a fire nation dress and the symbol on it. She left AAng and AAng awaken just in time for her wave goodbye. Then AAng slipped and fainted in rocks. He awaken at the funeral. This is were Soka was doing most of the talking. AAng was in Katara's lap. Katara tolled AAng that Zuko said he was sorrry. AAng looked the other way to see him right next to Zuko. "Furthormore Zuko's mom was a welled member of the family and Zuko and the fire nation. Soka was saying the same thing for 10 hrs and people were sleepy. Then Suki had to stop Soka before he went crazy. Suki came with a pink dress. Sokacame with a monkey suit a fake beard infact he was wearring the same thing that he wore at the beginning of book 3 when AAng was learnning at a fire nation school. After the funneral Katara and AAng talked and found more for each other than relized and Katara and AAng fiannly kissed. Then each hugged each other and Katara replied I'm sorry AAng and ran. To be countued. 13
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Comments
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Very good! I liked it, you put a lot of emotion in it. As always, can't wait to read the next chapter!



