the girlfriend and boyfriend (part two)

It comes to be v day and I go to get something from 1

my brother and he says "he doesn't have my thing". 2

so my friend and I go back to my desk and their is3

a bag sitting on my desk that says "to michaela".4

My friend says"michaela you have to look inside 5

and I betch you it is from nic".So I looked inside 6

their was a stuffed puppy,card,and chocalate.The 7

card said"you make my heart smile from nic" How8

could this be he cares about me this much but 9

how??..............................................?10

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  • fasterthanU
    March 31, 2005
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    i don't think a stuffed animal, a card, and chocolate is a sign of him "caring about you this much". and what a cheesy valentine's phrase to use. sounds like somebody meant to throw that bag in the trash.

  • Priscilla1993
    February 25, 2005
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    ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!nic loves you kala from adriana

  • -Rosie-
    February 23, 2005
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    Awww.... Thats so cute!!!! Its about Nic! I think you should keep writing about this... Make it longer next time... It would be alot better. -Jacky