Prologue- 'Hi my name is 692'

January 5, 30041

Harriet Family,2

We express regret for the unexpected discern to you; but this correspondence has been sent to you in for your 11-month-old daughter. She has been selected over thousands of other children to become a part of the WSPA (World Supremacy Preparation Academy) by the USA Gov. This program takes in infants and trains them as they develop to become brawny and potent to help guard and defend this world from any threat or harm by any other galaxy. This program is not new it has been going on for centuries and has been growing productively and we look onward to the approaching future. It is similar to a militia but more enhanced and improved. You should be honored that your child has been selected to such dependency to the world. She will be named 692. Someone from our party will meet you soon to pick up your child. What we say is final she WILL join the WSPA please understand and thank you.3

Official USA Government4

If you have any questions please call (866) 663-1WSPA5

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its a starting idea. please tell me what you think. should i countinue?

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  • ArcticFox
    August 30
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    this is really neat! i'm going to read on!


  • Snuggle-Bunny
    August 5

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    I feel bad for the little girl, she has no choice to do this. I can't wait to read, it sounds like an awesome story!!


  • ainshbu
    August 2
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    dang, they dont seem to have a choice and how will she find out who she really is? this is awesome.


  • LoveBubble
    August 1
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    Great start!!I'm looking forward to reading this!! Good luck~!!


  • gocubsgo25 silver member
    July 29
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    Looking forward to more, interesting concept.

  • sounds interesting. i think you should continue.

  • Ilike it. Good job. Keep up the good work.

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