I Don't Get It.

I don't get how I can look at your call and want to pick up when I know I shouldn't. 1

I don't get how I can still defend you, especially when you go and do stuff like this. 2

I don't get why my heart still skips a beat when I see you online when I know I should be angry instead.3

I don't get how I can still want you to be my first kiss when I should look for someone worth my tears.4

I don't get why I can't stop these dreams about you and me...after all, you broke me more than once and I should know better.5

And I really don't get how I can write all this, tell you I hate you, and tell you I never want to talk to you again, when I know deep down I still love you...6

So yeah, I just don't get it...

Author notes

My favorite band is Evanescence.

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  • trekkergirl
    December 10, 2008
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    I just don't get it.... loved the repeat of the words. Worked very well in this poem and with me. It showed a ton of emotions from love, hate, to confusion and loss. I loved this one very much! Would enjoy reading more like this one. Thanks for sharing this with us and thanks for entering it into my contest.


  • Noisome.
    August 14, 2008

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    Jenna, tell me what happened? Lovely writing, horribly situation. IM me, text me, call me. I need to talk to you! I'm home, btw! =D <3!!


  • Distancerunner19
    August 1, 2008

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    I completly understand how you felt writing this. Sadly I'm in a similar placement. How sad, but a good job and good luck!!