When a Nerd Falls in Love

This is kinda creepy.1

Indeed it is, just picture yourself been love by a nerd.2

Everyday you sit in class, hoping that he wont try to show off.3

The cutes guy is passing by, and you're ready to make a move.4

But suddenly your admirer interrupts.5

He stops in front of you, and stares for a while. Then finally he says,"I like your pen....it's shiny."6

What an idiot, if you gonna make a move, at least say something good.7

You look at him all puzzle. So he just walks away. But then you look and then your guy has been taken over by a cheerleader.  Oh great, it's all the nerds fault. err8

Why can he just leave you alone. 9

Then you were walking in the hall. Again he's staring at you w/ saliva dripping down. You can see his acne been cover with it. 10

What a disgusting thought!! 11

Then while he walks, he runs into a pole. Just to be nice you go up to him and asked him if he's OK.12

He looks straight into your eyes and then runs away.13

Soon it's time to walk home. You feel like some ones stocking you. Like you're been watch. Then that feeling stops. You turn around and what you see is some bullies beating the crap out of your admire re.14

Once again you come to his rescue and you tell them to stop. Again you ask him if he's OK. His hair is sticking up more than before. You actually grab his hand to help him get up. They feel all wet and musty.15

He glares at you, and you can tell that now he loves you even more than before.16

Nooooooooooo!!!!!17

Oh great, if this was only the first day of school, imagine how the entire school year it's going to be like.18

HELP!!!!
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  • La Dama del Ayer
    August 28, 2005
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    tee hee
    thanks for the comment and for pointing out the typo-^-^
    I dint notice it till you pointed it out- thanks
    ~*BB*~

  • Autumn Whisper
    August 27, 2005
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    gr8 story again, and just to let you know, its stalking not stocking lol , anywayz, good luck in the contest, hope ya get something good and worthwhile
    best wishes
    -Crazy-Poet-4-Eva-

  • La Dama del Ayer
    May 17, 2005
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    Oh yeah sachi I enjoy talking 2 my self, it's fun!!! thanks for reading and don't worry your my favorite idiot so i'll comment more often on your poetry 2. love ya
    and yeah I we all know that u love matt

  • Sachiel Hijikata
    May 6, 2005
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    Do you enjoy talking to yourself? XD Kidding! Talk to me instead, you nut, or comment on MY poems/stories. XD"" Nah, you don't have to. Anyways, BB! GUESS WHAT! -Shifty eyes- I love Matt, and want the world to know it! AHAHAHA~ Much love! Peace out, gangsta! -Cool pose- @_@ -Dork-
    ~Loser

  • La Dama del Ayer
    March 1, 2005
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    well am glad I didt dissapoint u. yup by reading the tittle u can already picture alot. thanks for reading. and am so glad u liked it.

  • La Dama del Ayer
    March 1, 2005
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    yeah your right, but hey am not that stupid so I don't usually ask for help. or maybe I do- err ^_^
    2bad that's jsut life
    we're preatty they do our homework
    reasonable-ha ha

  • La Dama del Ayer
    March 1, 2005
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    How lame is that. They could at least say something better don't u think. Yup!! they need help.
    and a life
    and a bath
    plus a hair cut

  • La Dama del Ayer
    March 1, 2005
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    Oh yeah bullies can save us. It's kisnda sad to noe that nerds get beat up. but still it's just freaken creepy when 1 likes u.
    They need to stop reading and start caring bout their image.

  • La Dama del Ayer
    March 1, 2005
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    Thanks for the advise. I think everyone of us is in danger. No one is safe!! Beware-err
    Sooner or later one of them will unfortunetly fall in love w/us. maybe there's someone of them that loves u already. KEEP ON THE WATCH!!!

  • La Dama del Ayer
    March 1, 2005
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    interesting!! well see at least he didn't stay as a nerd. He turn HOT!! hurray for him. and u the 1 that took over him. 2bad not every nerd can turn into a hottie.

  • La Dama del Ayer
    March 1, 2005
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    Really it's just plain creeepy how they try to make a move on you. or they just stare. juck!!!Thanks for reading. I'll comment on some of your work 2. -k- much love

  • La Dama del Ayer
    March 1, 2005
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    Thanks for reading, I don't wanna be mean but it is really creepy and a nerd likes you. Maybe if they improve their image they wouldn't be picked on so much. Oh well that's just life. 2bad for them. Still am glad u liked it. again thanks for reading. I'll be checking out some of your work 2.


  • Abscessed
    February 28, 2005
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    hahahah the title of your story immediately caught my eye and i wasn't dissapointed one bit! Really had a good laugh...keep up the good work!

  • macandrew
    February 26, 2005
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    good

    Sad, but think of all the science and math help you can get. Hmmmm, A's everywhere.

    John

  • Invisible Comfort
    February 25, 2005
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    Hahaha this is great. "I like your pen....it's shiny." haha how classy! couple of spelling/grammer mistakes. otherwise brilliant xxxxxx


  • ApathysEnemy
    February 24, 2005
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    great write

    lol this is a funny story. I'd hate to be that girl who's lover is a nerd. Be glad for bullies yay. nyway. keep penning.

  • Sparkling Diamond
    February 22, 2005
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    Thats Hott

    Awww Thats So cute! I mean eww an acne infested nerd but the way you wrote this poem is sooooo cute! If he said he loved you you should punch im in the nose or sumthen! But Yeah This Poem is soo cute!

  • DyingAlive
    February 22, 2005
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    Funny, funny, funny!

    I thought this was hilarious!!! I can totally relate too, funny thing is, my nerd got HOT and several years later, we're dating...how ironic. Anyways, keep up the writing, its really good!

  • hearttouchedfool
    February 22, 2005
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    so freaking funny

    lol hehe i loved this it is funny lol especially the part with the saliva lol nice touch lol

  • Florent
    February 22, 2005
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    Very funny!

    LoL! this poem is great! I like it! It made me chuckle!!! Very good work! keep writing like this and I'll keep reading em'! Great work! Poor nerd's... LoL! J/K!!! have a good day! Florent.

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