Together

Option 3: Two people are very close, but something happens that changes the perspective about how one sees the other forever. (This can go any way you want, but bonus points if it tears them apart.)1

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I thought we knew each other. As well as we knew ourselves.But the events of the last few days seems to have changed that completely....3

When i looked into her eyes i thought i saw her. So similar to me. Eyes the deepest blue with a hint of gold. Hair a glossy black mirror imaged by mine a pure white or blonde so fair. Pale porcelain skin. Delicate hands. Short and fine boned slim bodies. Longer in the body than legs. Flexible and fit.4

Almost identical on the outside.
So different on the inside.5

You think you know someone inside out. Especially when you are as close as we were. Two halves of that so called whole. I knew her moods as well as i knew my own. Loving and caring. She would be there through it all as i would do for her. And I have!6

I love her. It's true. She is my flesh and blood. She is my sister. My twin on the outside. My opposite on the inside.7

But this event has torn us apart for ever. My sister. I thought i knew you. Till that fateful day...
You looked at me in such a way that melted my soul. Your laugh of sheer delight brought tears to my eyes. You wanted to be free of me. An individual and not my copy. Not my Shadow. You wanted to be recognised for you. And not as me. We argued and fought.8

And you wrapped yourself round that fucking tree. And left your shadow. That's what i am with out you. You have torn me down sister dear. Oh how i hate you and i loved and love you so much more.9

COME BACK TO ME...

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  • StarDragon
    August 7, 2008

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    Very intresting read! I like that they were twins, something that I wouldn't have thought to play on, and this story has a lot of emotions in it.

    Nice work, and thanks for the entry!