Dark Mistress © Me (Alias: Princess)1
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Her deathly glare leaves you unsteady,
With chills down your spine.
As her fingers trace your very soul,
You breathe your last breath,
As the knife slits your throat.
And the blood splatters on the marbled tiles
Of which once stood glory, profound in his days,
But now fall to the ground, a shattered soul,
Before the deadly smile of the dark mistress.
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It's good.
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Uh, thank you!
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Really, I like it. Unique thing it is.
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Oks! Thanks again, I felt bored and random when I wrote this, but hey, it's better than entering and not doing anything. Cause I happened to do that a lot >_<
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I know what u mean.
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OMG! Creepy! Princess.... brrrrrrrrr. lol. I loved the descriptions. 'trace your very soul,' was my favourite part... Wow, shivery and disturbing. Brilliant job! Sorry it took me so long to return the favour of you reading 'kiss by the waterfall', I've been very busy lately. This was absolutely excellent, keep writing, I loved it!
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Thank you so much for the lovely comment Dippie! I really appreciate it ^^ And it's ok, I understand. I try hard to return favours too >_< Anyways, thank you again! It really means a lot when people read AND comment on my work!
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AWESOME!
I love this. It was really good. It wa a nice little poem, I thought, and made shivers go up my spine. Awesome job, August Lily. Keep up the good work! -
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Thank you again for the comment! I appreciate it, and I'm happy I could really let you feel the emotion within it. I'll try and keep it up! Thank you!
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Here it is!!!
http://media.photobucket.com/image/an%20evil%20smile/SandyMonkey/Real%20Pictures/evil_smile.jpg?o=27 -
Okay, but first. Let me comment because I'm tryiing to win a gold membership so I can change my name all week! This ISN'T SPAM!
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ROfl 
Ah, I remember when I was equally desperate I even commented on my own stories xD
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