I don't know what it is that makes me 1
want to write about this child, or 2
why I watched as she grunted and talked 3
to her self when she put on her green 4
and purple, one piece, snow suite. 5
Maybe it's the way I laughed inside 6
when she turned and looked at me, 7
with her up turned nose, and rainbow 8
colored hat, pushing down the greasy 9
orange hair she had just slicked down 10
with a wod of spit on her dirty hand. 11
Or maybe it was the way I shook my 12
head and smiled when she finished off 13
with pink boots, orange mittens, and 14
strutted outside, 15
determined for anything..16
ha..ha.. right...17
Author notes
I would put this in the catagory creepy but that just don't have it.. sadly..
I wrote this while I was sitting in the hall at my school, watching this funny looking little girl get ready to go outside.. it's kinda short.. but.. oh well..
Rebecca
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This is interesting. I didn't know what to make of it until I saw your author's comment. It's an interesting thing to write a story about. Anyway, you did a nice job with this, especially with the descriptions.
Becky
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