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She stood up, high on the ceiling, shaking in terror. She tried to look down, but she didn't want to see the fall awaiting her. She was all alone up there. No one could help her. That was what she needed, really. Help, and guidance.2
She couldn't do it. How had she gotten to this point? She didn't want to be there anymore. She could stop this all happening if she wanted. But there wasn't anymore time. It was now or never. She gripped the itchy rope with her sweaty, shaking hands, secured herself, and jumped off the ladder.3
She felt herself falling, plunging down to the ground. She wanted to scream. Next second the rope pulled her up, across the stage. Quickly, remembering the quick words of her instructor, she moved her body, ready grab hold of the other trapeze wire.4
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Up high, near the ceiling. Shaking in terror. Glance down, wince, long fall below. Heart pounding, breath quickening hands sweating. All alone. No one in sight. Voices, cheerfully chattering, laughing together. If only they knew the pain searing in her mind. ripping it apart. No help. She needed that right now. Help. And lots of it.7
Impossible. Couldn't do it. How had it gotten to this? Didn't want too do it anymore. Could stop it all happening. No more time. Had to do it. fast. Now or never. Grips itchy rope, hands shaking, secures herself. Jumps off.8
Falling, plunging. Stiffles a scream. Relaxes as she falls through the air. Sense of self-accomplishment and acheivement. Next second, the rope pulls her up, keeping her tightly in it's control. Words of her mentor float in her mind. Moves her body. Grabs the other trapeze wire.
Author notes
yip. its pretty randomly thrown together.
Which one is better to read?
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I like this one the short choppy thoughts are really a nice touch to this one. In the moment of fear and the 'how the hell did I get here' moments thats really how it is. I was just wondering by the end of the peice is your main character grabbibng the third or second rope?
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thank you!
um. second i guess....
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hmm, I like them both... they could be seperate stories, or they could be different people at the same time... -
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well, the story line is supposed to be exactly the same in bot for the same person. i just wanna know if one caught anyones attention? more than the other...
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oh yea, so which one is better? ill split them up so you can tell which is which....
Ali, yu are so morbid. just because a story is titled die die die doesn't mean the chick is gonna splat. lol -
Wowe. That was strange. I thought that she was going to miss and go splat on the ground. Sorry, rather morbid of me. But it is called die die die. So what was I to expect??
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Lol.! Like It. I Cant Belive Yu Actually Wrote Something.
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i know. im amazed. criticism?
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Very good! Strange but well written!
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