Stop A Bullet Outline1
**Basic Story outline** 2
A girl leaves home after years of abuse. The younger (by three three years) brother is left as a replacement for abuse. 3
When he to leaves home he goes in search of his sister- In the long run he finds her working in the clubs (and working the streets) controlled By a P.I.M.P who is not willing to loose his best woman.4
In trying to save his sister he get caught by a mob, threatened and leaves with his sister being shot right before the police turn up.5
Angry, tired and seeking vengeance for his sisters death he steals the gun before the police arrive and heads for the person (who if it wasn't for the abuse he believes would never had killed his sister) and uses the remaining bullets to receive justice for his sisters death.6
**One Sentence Major Plot point Outline **7
Beginning {Abusing & Homelessness}8
. The abusing Of Maggie – (describe the house the sounds ext9
. Maggie runs away10
. The Abuse of Tai11
. Tai Runs away12
. The life on the street begins13
[First quarter] {Finding Maggie}14
. The first night on the streets15
. Trying to survive – while maintaining his job16
. Is in a hostel – were he catches a glimps of a girl that looks like Maggie17
. He follows her towards a downtown strip club18
.Finds Maggie in the night time doing street-work (talks to her)19
[Second quarter] {Helping Maggie escape}20
. Maggie agrees to meet with Tai to talk21
. Maggie gets work for Tai at the club22
. Tai attempts to free her to make a life for them (Fails)23
. Things get suspicious and Tai begins to feel like he is being watched24
. Tai warns Maggie and Maggie tells a story about a young man who tried to steal women.25
[ Anti-Climax] {The Great escape}26
. Tai attempts to free Maggie after seeing the death of his mother in the paper27
. This time she agrees and they escape28
. Mason has a show lines up all for her and she does not turn up costing them money and customers.29
. Mason sends his men after Tai & is instructed to kill him and bring back Maggie.30
. The two are found and There is a fight between the men, Maggie and Tai31
[Climax ]{ Avenging The death of Maggie}32
. In the fight one man is injured by Tai33
. One man has a gun and aims it at Tai and instead Maggie screams (outside neighbor calls the police. 34
.Maggie is shot but knocks the gun from the man thus shooting him (Maggie lays and waits as she hears the police come she tells Tai to run.35
. Tai does not want to run, but takes the gun angry and already ready to seek revenge.36
.Tai heads towards his home, with the gun which Maggie was shot with with every intention on killing his father. 37
**MAJOR CHARACTERS **38
Wilberson – Grant Family39
Taint (Tai) Wilberson] – Main Characters40
Margaret (Maggie) Wilberson – Main Character41
Trey Grant (Step-Father) - Mini- Character 42
Tanya Grant (Mother)- Mini Character43
**OTHERS AT PRESENT **44
Mr. Mason – P.I.M.P 45
Author notes
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My August Nathional Novel Writing Month Outline (Novel)
This is just an idea of how I am plotting and writing my novel for the people intersted in my contest and for those just intersted in seeing how the progress pans out.
(c) 2008 Tennille Chase
(I have to even copyright my ideas now Lol I am very posessive over this storyline how good or stupid it may seem as it is the very first novel I have ever known the beginning - middle and ending for)
Thanks Blair ~
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If you read..Please comment.. honest feedback !!
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Wow, nice idea. I've never worked with an outline before; my stories sometimes end up entirely differently from how I planned them and my characters sometimes act in totally unexpected ways. But this could definitely work, especially since it was detailed enough to let you know exactly where you're going but not so rigid you have no play. Very nice idea and it sounded like a most interesting story. Good luck with it!
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Nice way to do an outline. I like the simple one sentence one best. I have never tried to work with an outline... I never know how things end... it just seems to take on a life of itself, but I am going to try doing this and see wehre it leads me! Tallblondie had a contest (I saw it too late to enter) where you filled out all this bio information on your main character. I just did that and it was hard to do! It made me realize just how much I didn't know about my main characters. Good luck with Nano and your novels!
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Wow sounds interesting hun =) Good that your writing spirit still exists.
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wow I cann't even put what i think about this in words it's a master peace my little vampire queen wow wow wow is all I can say.
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Interesting. When I write I don't do outlines like that. I just let whatever comes to mind flow. Whether at first it makes sense or not. Then I sort of weed it out. Change it. Add to it. Whatever, sometimes it takes me a while to get it where I want it to go. Sometimes it gets done real quick. All depends on me. My mood. And what the story wants.
Trekkergirl
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I am the same usually this is my first time EVER planning a story or novel in this fashion..I like to try new things and see were they take me. I have written the last four novels in free-flow and now I am testing out the method of outlining.
Thank you for taking the time to check my outline out and thank you for your feedback. if you ever want to talk about writing or just talk Im me and I shall be happy to talk
Blair
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