Stella and Adrian made their way over to the fountain. Adrian gently placed down Stella’s books, and stretched out along the side of the fountain. Stella looked at him and giggled. Adrian looked at her and smiled, pushing the silver hair from his eyes. 1
“You look really cute,” smiled Stella. 2
Adrian then looked up at the sky, not saying a word. 3
“Thanks,” he mumbled, shyly. 4
Stella smiled and then opened one of her books to start reading. Adrian stared up at the sky. 5
“It’s almost as beautiful as the ocean,” he smiled. 6
Stella looked down at him from her book. 7
“Almost?” she asked. 8
“Yeah, I love the sea,” smiled Adrian, turning his head to look at her. 9
A big smile drew upon Stella’s face. 10
As the two continued to sit in silence, a group of giggling girls came up to them. 11
“Hey, Adrian,” laughed the girls.12
Adrian opened his eyes and looked at them. 13
“Hi,” he mumbled, closing his eyes again. 14
“Are you ok?” asked one girl. 15
“Fine,” answered Adrian, sighing. *Great* thought Adrian, letting out another deep breath. 16
“Who are you?” some girl sneered. 17
“Oh, Hello. My name is Stella,” 18
“Oh,” said the girl. “Adrian, is she bothering you?” asked the girls.19
“No, but I know some people who are,” he said, his voice trailing off. 20
The girls didn’t hear him, and continued questioning them. 21
“Well, is she your girlfriend?” asked a girl. 22
Adrian’s faced turned pink. 23
“No!” he quickly said. 24
The girls stared at him, and Stella laughed. 25
“What’s so funny?” the girls asked. 26
“Me and Adrian are friends, that’s all,” said Stella, laughing.27
Adrian looked at her, and smiled. 28
“Well then, if he is just your friend, have fun getting wet!” yelled a girl, pushing her into the fountain. 29
Adrian jumped to her rescue, as the girls ran off. 30
“Stella!” he shouted, lunging behind her. 31
Stella dropped her book, and fell in, eyes closed. She was drenched from had to toe in water. She opened her eyes, feeling something behind her. Stella looked back and saw Adrian. 32
“Adrian,” she said softly. 33
His eyes were closed, and his back twitching. He had hit the fountain hard. 34
“Yeah,” he smiled, opening an eye. 35
“Thank you,” said Stella, looking up at him. 36
His arms around her waist, and her back against his chest. Stella turned around, still in the water. 37
“Thank you!” she said again. 38
Adrian looked down at her and smile. The twos’ faces started reaching towards each other. Stella closed her eyes, and both their faces turned pink. Their lips met. The bells in the courtyard started to ring, signaling it was one o’clock. The two sat there in the water, lips locked. Adrian felt so calm and peaceful, Stella felt as if she was as light as a feather. When Adrian moved away, his face was bright pink. Stella looked up at him shyly.39
“Sorry,” said Adrian, looking at her. 40
“It‘s…ok,” said Stella. 41
“You sure?” asked Adrian. 42
“Yes!” said Stella, planting a kiss on Adrian’s cheek.
Author notes
Kigam - is a word I use in one of my own stories... so yeah.
A contest entry
- Scene: The Kiss by Tiger-Lily.
280 points, ended August 23, 2008, 36 entries
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
Whatcha think?
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Typo on the first word does not give a good impression. ^_^
Hm...interesting idea, but the wording didn't let if low for me. Good attempt.
Thanks for entering.
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Aww. So cute and adorable.
Short, but really sweet. I agree with Breaking Dawn, I'd love to learn more about the characters.
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Thanks!
Thank you! I'm happy you like it! Your name is awesome by the way. And as for knowing the characters better my story "Midnight Myth" involves these characters, and right now I am actually posting the ten chapters I have so far incase you are interested >.< Once again thank you. -
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You're welcome. And thanks.
Oh? Thanks for letting me know. I'll check them out right now.
And you're welcome, again.
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Aw this was cute. I would love to learn more about the characters.
When you incorporate a character's thoughts into the story, you either use single quotes, ', or italics. Both of which you can use whether you're a free member or not.
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Thank you very much for your comment, yeah I learned after I typed most of the story about the itaclis, so I started to do the right format, and the italics in word starting with ch.10, yeah so I am correcting alot of stuff. Thank you again. >.<
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Option number please?
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Um... what does "option number" mean?
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Oh, which option from my contest you used. xD
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SORRY! lol XD I used first kiss scene.
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Its a cute story, I can tell you have some really great ideas.
You should try adding in some more backround to each character, I think that would help make the story more interesting.
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Thank you, this is actually an insert from one of my Chapters of the book I am working on >.< -
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wow! a book!
thats a lot of work, but im sure you have what it takes to handle it.
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Again, thank you >.<
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